
5/10/2013 c13
13immortalwizardpirateelf-fan
hehehehehehehe Charlie isn't looking very good to his subordinates right now is he? *smirks* Oh and look, if he even tries to squeal against the Cullen's "mafia" business, who would believe the insane and psychotic ex chief of police who had basically attempted to sell his daughter whom he abused for years and who had killed his wife? *looks around*

hehehehehehehe Charlie isn't looking very good to his subordinates right now is he? *smirks* Oh and look, if he even tries to squeal against the Cullen's "mafia" business, who would believe the insane and psychotic ex chief of police who had basically attempted to sell his daughter whom he abused for years and who had killed his wife? *looks around*
5/10/2013 c13 BB Masen-Cullen
Hmmm... Interesting interesting! I can't wait till the next chapter! :D
Hmmm... Interesting interesting! I can't wait till the next chapter! :D
5/10/2013 c13
1Taylor9901
I do love this story. Charlie needs to get a grip on reality. Keep it coming please. I'm not beyond begging.

I do love this story. Charlie needs to get a grip on reality. Keep it coming please. I'm not beyond begging.
5/9/2013 c1
2Sonja Whitlock
Charlie sold Bella ... Really? This story definitely has a different introduction.

Charlie sold Bella ... Really? This story definitely has a different introduction.
5/8/2013 c12
8Sassy Mami
I hope you update soon.
Please go back and read over your chapters so you can see and fix your mistakes.

I hope you update soon.
Please go back and read over your chapters so you can see and fix your mistakes.
5/8/2013 c12 BB Masen-Cullen
Eek! I wonder what Charlie is going to do? Can't wait till the next chapter!
Eek! I wonder what Charlie is going to do? Can't wait till the next chapter!
4/26/2013 c11 TiffanyD
I can't wait to read more to find out what they r going to do after finding out all this stuff her dad did to her momma, and I wonder if they r gonna take Jacob out
I can't wait to read more to find out what they r going to do after finding out all this stuff her dad did to her momma, and I wonder if they r gonna take Jacob out