
2/28/2013 c2
2Scarred Seeker
Thanks for the update... I love when writers put in their own spin in their story so we won't be reading the same thing for each and every time a story restarts.
"The Black Savior..." I want to see how it turns out.
I wonder if Kirito revealing his 2 swords skill this early will change the course of the story... I'm really looking forward to it.
Thanks again and hope to read more soon.

Thanks for the update... I love when writers put in their own spin in their story so we won't be reading the same thing for each and every time a story restarts.
"The Black Savior..." I want to see how it turns out.
I wonder if Kirito revealing his 2 swords skill this early will change the course of the story... I'm really looking forward to it.
Thanks again and hope to read more soon.
2/28/2013 c2 Thomas
Nice story, I look foreward to reading more.
Nice story, I look foreward to reading more.
2/25/2013 c1 xbamsod
The chapter was pretty good. Poor Suguha is going to take having Kirito stuck a lot harder than before. I'm looking forward to reading how this all changes Kirito in the game. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update Soon :D
The chapter was pretty good. Poor Suguha is going to take having Kirito stuck a lot harder than before. I'm looking forward to reading how this all changes Kirito in the game. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Update Soon :D
2/24/2013 c1
9Slicerness
A really interesting start. I'm eager to see where you take this. I'm sure there are plenty of beta testers who wanted to be in a Guild but no one will take them because of the whole 'beater' thing. If I remember right there were a few hundred solo players who attempted to face the first floor boss and ended up dying, they could really bolster Kirito and Klien's Guild if they can be recruited before they charge off and die.

A really interesting start. I'm eager to see where you take this. I'm sure there are plenty of beta testers who wanted to be in a Guild but no one will take them because of the whole 'beater' thing. If I remember right there were a few hundred solo players who attempted to face the first floor boss and ended up dying, they could really bolster Kirito and Klien's Guild if they can be recruited before they charge off and die.
2/22/2013 c1
4Stellar Spirit
This is one of the best first fanfiction story's I have ever read, and its only the first chapter! Keep up the good work!;)

This is one of the best first fanfiction story's I have ever read, and its only the first chapter! Keep up the good work!;)
2/22/2013 c1
2Scarred Seeker
I really like the story you're making... I like how you're Kirito is turning into... 'The Path of Leadership'
Love it... Hope to read more soon. Thank you for the story.

I really like the story you're making... I like how you're Kirito is turning into... 'The Path of Leadership'
Love it... Hope to read more soon. Thank you for the story.
2/22/2013 c1 Nanospeed
A good read. Kazuto and Sugu are in character, grammar is good, and the grandfather's decision to show kindness instead of frustration to Kazuto will be the butterfly effect setting off this story.
A good read. Kazuto and Sugu are in character, grammar is good, and the grandfather's decision to show kindness instead of frustration to Kazuto will be the butterfly effect setting off this story.