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6/23/2014 c1 2TheCountessInRed
This is really cool! And sad... I like it! I feel bad for Tsuna, poor him. Anyways, write on!
9/27/2013 c1 7Lucenthia
this looks like it has a lot of potential. You're pretty good at describing Tsuna's situation, and the dickheadedness of Ienobu. As you probably know, there are a lot of grammar mistakes. Do you want me to help you with this?
Also, be careful with the dreams and Tsuna hearing voices, because it's very very touching, but just make sure it gets resolved and explained in the story.
Keep on Updating!
9/21/2013 c1 Fiamma-Del-Cielo
Please update! Your story is really good! Please continue it!
I wanna know what will happen! Please! Please!
Update! Update! Update! :D
6/16/2013 c1 iluvfairytale
I like it so far. I was honestly looking forward to hibari first, but oh well.
5/10/2013 c1 1Yelizaveta.13
It's a good start, so all of the guardians will be getting these flashbacks? Some of the characters seem a bit off, I hope you can fix that... I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!
3/31/2013 c1 Zephyr Anemoi
AHHHH! This is sooooo good! Please write more! *puppy dog eyes*
3/29/2013 c1 1Jazz Bug
Lots of potential, terrible grammer. If you work on it and edit the story than it should flow a lot better than it does know. I like where this story is going.
3/9/2013 c1 103Grace-Logan
This is a great story and I hope you go on with it.
For a way to intro Hibari maybe go with Tsuna being bullied or beaten or him being late or being blamed for something Ienobou did and gets sent to the DC maybe they meet by total
co-winkydink when Tsuna gets attacked on his way home from school by some gang and Hibari saves him generally I think you should go with Hibari either saving him by accident or trying to beat him up for breaking the rules of his precious Namimori school.

Either way though I hope you can get an idea for the next chapter soon I'm looking forward to the next chapter, though I would recommend bringing in Hibari before anyone else apart from Reborn it doesn't really matter when he comes in he'll screw with them all either way.

If you put Gokudere before Hibari though you could make them all meet in one chapter by Gokudere getting him and Tsuna in trouble with his dynamite or something.

Hee hee I've rambled on long enough this message in probably a pain in the ass to read cause its so long, sorry bout that, but as I said before I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
3/1/2013 c1 Sroom
Parallel!Tsuna? Count me in. I like this fic. You've done a great job. I agree with you though. I really want Hibari or Gokudera to appear first but c'est la vie. I'll be waiting for your next chapter so don't take it to long 'kay? Oh, will there be any pairing in this fic? Well that's all, for now. Ciao. Over & out.
2/28/2013 c1 KyoTsuMu182769
i can already guess that all of the guardians have the same dream :3 and can i ask in which form Reborn is? baby or adult? (coz some fic like this have Reborn in adult form)
2/26/2013 c1 5Echo Andalice
poor tsuna.. i wouldnt suprise if he commite suicide.. T.T
hm.. have a lot of potensial..
keep writting.. :D
2/25/2013 c1 1sunfun
Nice.
2/24/2013 c1 13Angelic Phantomcrow
you made me really curious!
Really curious!
Really curious...
Well, anyway
Thank you for sharing this!
I like it!
It's seems interesting
2/24/2013 c1 Afiana Arch
Uwooooh... I like it. It looked flashy to me xD

It was already a common thing that tsuna's twin always bullied his older brother, but make a mysterious reason why Ieoshi do that! It'll make the stort a lot more interesting :D

But I love it keep it up and I look forward for the next chapter xD
2/24/2013 c1 21Invisible-16
It's a nice start!
Hahaha... Somehow i get you when yamamoto comes in first. Almost ALL of the fics i've start with Tsuna meeting Yamamoto... that or maybe the fact that Yamamoto is the first guardian introduced to Tsuna in the manga AND anime... _"

Yeah... i'm going to shut up now...

P.S

Please update whenever possibe! :D
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Okay so this time i'm going to shut up...

Bye-bye :))
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