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3/3 c1 2costley51
I like this alternative. Thanks!
10/22/2016 c1 3PastOneonta
This is very good. The system's disregard for Neal as a person was painful. Thanks to Peter and Diana he was cleared and healed. Very well written.
8/17/2016 c1 7LEMarauder
Very nice elaboration! Any H/C version of events totally works for me, so I definitely love this extension. Great flow and characterizations, and of course all the whump badness made me squee.
Cheers,
LEMarauder
3/5/2013 c1 19Fierce Queen
Ooh! Love, love, love. Poor Neal :( Go Mozzie! Sue the gov't if nec! :D Loved it very much :)

Good job!

Blessings,
Fierce
2/27/2013 c1 Guest
This is fantastic! Please write more hurt Neal... there's not enough of it that's well-written on this site!
2/27/2013 c1 wotumba1
good story
2/26/2013 c1 Guest
loved it
2/26/2013 c1 velveteen habit
Wonderful! Thanks for supplying me with some quality h/c. Hope there's more from you soon.
2/26/2013 c1 80peppe1951
This was great. I loved how you fit it all in together and made it sound so good. Please write another.

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