
12/25/2013 c15
16Jknight3135
As all great stories must it has come to an end, I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this and you can bet I'll be around for any more you put out.
-Jknight

As all great stories must it has come to an end, I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this and you can bet I'll be around for any more you put out.
-Jknight
12/25/2013 c15
2Ms. Rugby
I am amazed by how touching this story is. I'm afraid that I have only come to read your fics late in your writing career, but I hope that I am not witnessing the end of it. I personally feel like I am picky about the stories I read, quickly dropping those who do not have the skill to keep my attention, but this has yet to happen with you. I hope to read some new work of yours in the future.

I am amazed by how touching this story is. I'm afraid that I have only come to read your fics late in your writing career, but I hope that I am not witnessing the end of it. I personally feel like I am picky about the stories I read, quickly dropping those who do not have the skill to keep my attention, but this has yet to happen with you. I hope to read some new work of yours in the future.
12/25/2013 c15
7Frosty Wolf
Short but sweet, I love it. I'm sorry to see this end, but I do look forward to seeing your future work.
Merry Christmas!

Short but sweet, I love it. I'm sorry to see this end, but I do look forward to seeing your future work.
Merry Christmas!
12/25/2013 c15
15storytell18
It's quite a short chapter, SilentlyWatches - but you got in the wedding and got Raven and Jinx married. You got Ravager as the maid of honor plus Persephone as the flower girl with Melvin, and Ruiz as the minister (interesting how he got the last line in both Coincidence and Consequence). I was sort of expecting Cyborg and Lisa to be formally introduced to Ruiz (their boss) and for them to join the Perseus Initiative (which was kind of how I was anticipating the story to end a few chapters back). Who knew Raven could be worked up by a wedding when she could calmly make a threat to kill the Titans?
An excellent conclusion to your Misunderstandings series.
-storytell18

It's quite a short chapter, SilentlyWatches - but you got in the wedding and got Raven and Jinx married. You got Ravager as the maid of honor plus Persephone as the flower girl with Melvin, and Ruiz as the minister (interesting how he got the last line in both Coincidence and Consequence). I was sort of expecting Cyborg and Lisa to be formally introduced to Ruiz (their boss) and for them to join the Perseus Initiative (which was kind of how I was anticipating the story to end a few chapters back). Who knew Raven could be worked up by a wedding when she could calmly make a threat to kill the Titans?
An excellent conclusion to your Misunderstandings series.
-storytell18
12/25/2013 c15
10The Mad Mad Reviewer
Congratulations! You finished something! Doesn't it feel wonderful?

Congratulations! You finished something! Doesn't it feel wonderful?
12/25/2013 c15
16drakenichols1
A demoness and a supposed-deity tying the knot in a sort of Christian ceremony? Hmmm... Yeah, it works.
So this short storyline of Misunderstandings finally draws to a close with very little to be said other than the fact that this was a very well-written conclusion to the story. Everything was pretty much in order, you managed to keep the pacing just right even for a one-thousand-worded chapter, the characters were pretty much kept in check save for Raven. I mean, I kinda saw the old her from before she completed her Ascension when she was fretting in the beginning of this chapter. It was adorable.
I really cannot say anything else since I've already showed Silently Watches how much I love these stories. I saw no grammatical errors whatsoever (unless I missed some), the plot was well-written, the characters had very believable personalities, and we've all learned to accept chaos alongside order. Two sides of the same coin, one without the other is just asking for a paradox.
Then again...both Raven and Jinx are epitomes of chaos so just who is order? Eh, whatever.
I'll say this though, I really wish that SW would find a reason to kill Nightwing off since he's been nothing but a self-righteous bastard with a narrow mind to "complement" his virtuous character. I also really wanted Garfield to die as well since I never liked BB in here and the original series. An immature prick, dumb as a rock, never sensitive to other people's feelings, and just never learns from his mistakes. Seriously, shoulda found a way to get rid of these guys legitimately.
I like how this story ended actually. You cut it just at the end of the most important part of the ceremony, leaving us to guess just what happens next. Endless possibilities. Either a bright or dark future awaits these two. You can't rule out the idea of them either falling out of love or one of them perishing at one point in life. Yeah it's depressing, but it's those stories that actually make an impact on the reader.
SW, please watch out for a PM from me since I'll be telling you of my future plans in a TT story as well as an update to the fanart I'm making. Sorry for the delay but personal dilemmas are getting in the way of any inspiration flowing into me.
I thank you, Silently Watches, for a wonderful read. Peace out, and Merry Christmas!

A demoness and a supposed-deity tying the knot in a sort of Christian ceremony? Hmmm... Yeah, it works.
So this short storyline of Misunderstandings finally draws to a close with very little to be said other than the fact that this was a very well-written conclusion to the story. Everything was pretty much in order, you managed to keep the pacing just right even for a one-thousand-worded chapter, the characters were pretty much kept in check save for Raven. I mean, I kinda saw the old her from before she completed her Ascension when she was fretting in the beginning of this chapter. It was adorable.
I really cannot say anything else since I've already showed Silently Watches how much I love these stories. I saw no grammatical errors whatsoever (unless I missed some), the plot was well-written, the characters had very believable personalities, and we've all learned to accept chaos alongside order. Two sides of the same coin, one without the other is just asking for a paradox.
Then again...both Raven and Jinx are epitomes of chaos so just who is order? Eh, whatever.
I'll say this though, I really wish that SW would find a reason to kill Nightwing off since he's been nothing but a self-righteous bastard with a narrow mind to "complement" his virtuous character. I also really wanted Garfield to die as well since I never liked BB in here and the original series. An immature prick, dumb as a rock, never sensitive to other people's feelings, and just never learns from his mistakes. Seriously, shoulda found a way to get rid of these guys legitimately.
I like how this story ended actually. You cut it just at the end of the most important part of the ceremony, leaving us to guess just what happens next. Endless possibilities. Either a bright or dark future awaits these two. You can't rule out the idea of them either falling out of love or one of them perishing at one point in life. Yeah it's depressing, but it's those stories that actually make an impact on the reader.
SW, please watch out for a PM from me since I'll be telling you of my future plans in a TT story as well as an update to the fanart I'm making. Sorry for the delay but personal dilemmas are getting in the way of any inspiration flowing into me.
I thank you, Silently Watches, for a wonderful read. Peace out, and Merry Christmas!
12/25/2013 c15
17Kalico-To-The-Letter
Ah, this topped off my Christmas today. It's been a long, fantastic ride with this duology, and it's sending itself out on a high note, after all the various trials and tribulations scattered throughout the two stories. Great work.

Ah, this topped off my Christmas today. It's been a long, fantastic ride with this duology, and it's sending itself out on a high note, after all the various trials and tribulations scattered throughout the two stories. Great work.
12/25/2013 c15
4aSecondStory
Only a few hours before I read this chapter I found out that I missed my chance with the girl I really liked now as I dot here drink and reading, I would love to say I enjoyed the chapter but I can't because I am honestly pissed that it got a happy ending and I didn't.

Only a few hours before I read this chapter I found out that I missed my chance with the girl I really liked now as I dot here drink and reading, I would love to say I enjoyed the chapter but I can't because I am honestly pissed that it got a happy ending and I didn't.
12/25/2013 c15
2amado15
ah it has ended... well for now. the wedding was fun, liked the "please keep your mouth shut".
though you could have added some more exposition of the end, like showing the kiss with raven/jinx overwhelming the other or something.
anyways its great to see how far you reached with this story of yours. you may not remember but I was the one who first posted the fanfic recommendation in tvtropes.
hope you make at least other TT fics of raven embracing her demonic side, even if its not pairing specific.

ah it has ended... well for now. the wedding was fun, liked the "please keep your mouth shut".
though you could have added some more exposition of the end, like showing the kiss with raven/jinx overwhelming the other or something.
anyways its great to see how far you reached with this story of yours. you may not remember but I was the one who first posted the fanfic recommendation in tvtropes.
hope you make at least other TT fics of raven embracing her demonic side, even if its not pairing specific.
12/24/2013 c15
8The Sinful
The Vegas Vacation challenge bugs me. Mostly because the responses to it are so damn similar that you can read a dozen and not be certain you didn't just read two or three stories six times each.
Good read of course. I'm glad I read this series.
Huh, didn't even notice the shout-out to me until I scrolled back up. Neato.

The Vegas Vacation challenge bugs me. Mostly because the responses to it are so damn similar that you can read a dozen and not be certain you didn't just read two or three stories six times each.
Good read of course. I'm glad I read this series.
Huh, didn't even notice the shout-out to me until I scrolled back up. Neato.
12/24/2013 c15
227whitetigerwolf
another great story.
Personally, I'm hopping you start the Vegas Vacation Challenge next, but I suppose I'll have to wait a bit.
Anyway, keep up the good work.

another great story.
Personally, I'm hopping you start the Vegas Vacation Challenge next, but I suppose I'll have to wait a bit.
Anyway, keep up the good work.
12/24/2013 c15 discb
Huh, weddings seem to be harder then Black-ops...
Thanks for the ride, it was a blast.
Huh, weddings seem to be harder then Black-ops...
Thanks for the ride, it was a blast.
12/17/2013 c14 ArinaSugarBaby
To bad this is the end of the story but I must say Thank you for adding this story to the site. I really have enjoyed reading it.
To bad this is the end of the story but I must say Thank you for adding this story to the site. I really have enjoyed reading it.
12/9/2013 c14 FacadeSmiles
Ending this story may sadden you but its only the end of this tale, and a new one awaits you. (That is of course if you diside to write another story) Im baisicly tryin' to say all your hard work will pay off in the end and you have a clean slate to do whatever you want.
Ending this story may sadden you but its only the end of this tale, and a new one awaits you. (That is of course if you diside to write another story) Im baisicly tryin' to say all your hard work will pay off in the end and you have a clean slate to do whatever you want.