
12/1/2018 c13 Mernom
Hmm. From what I know, the revenge fic genre refers to stories where the main character is betrayed by their allies, and becomes a Sasuke on everyone. While this story was good for the most part, this status quo no changing in the slightest ever since chapter 1 is starting to get old.
Hmm. From what I know, the revenge fic genre refers to stories where the main character is betrayed by their allies, and becomes a Sasuke on everyone. While this story was good for the most part, this status quo no changing in the slightest ever since chapter 1 is starting to get old.
12/1/2018 c12 Mernom
I have to admit, I'm not a fan of this twist. You can't do that, and then just cop out like that. I was a bit sad when it happened, and now I feel betrayed, like just did it it squeeze my heart, and once the juice run out, you sent it back complaining that it's defective.
Things like character death can be done right, and so do character resurrection, but this is not how it's done.
I have to admit, I'm not a fan of this twist. You can't do that, and then just cop out like that. I was a bit sad when it happened, and now I feel betrayed, like just did it it squeeze my heart, and once the juice run out, you sent it back complaining that it's defective.
Things like character death can be done right, and so do character resurrection, but this is not how it's done.
12/1/2018 c10 Mernom
Summoning the demon army was kinda overkill. And not in the good 'there's no kill like overkill' way, but the bad way, as in just levitating the enemy would be enough to end that fight.
Summoning the demon army was kinda overkill. And not in the good 'there's no kill like overkill' way, but the bad way, as in just levitating the enemy would be enough to end that fight.
12/1/2018 c6 Mernom
That explanation for Starfire does explain some things about her. But it does raise up a rather important bit: running away from the problem won't solve it.
That explanation for Starfire does explain some things about her. But it does raise up a rather important bit: running away from the problem won't solve it.
11/30/2018 c4 Mernom
Hmm. Why the HECK is Starfire still in jump, if she has an entire empire to rule? Leading an entire species is way more important than protecting ONE city. Especially now that she's past her teenage years, so the excuse of 'teenage Rebellion' doesn't work anymore. And neither does the 'she's still a princess' excuse.
Hmm. Why the HECK is Starfire still in jump, if she has an entire empire to rule? Leading an entire species is way more important than protecting ONE city. Especially now that she's past her teenage years, so the excuse of 'teenage Rebellion' doesn't work anymore. And neither does the 'she's still a princess' excuse.
11/30/2018 c1 Mernom
Gonna say it right here, that opening is too lovely dovely in my opinion. I know that they were at it for a while now, but one could argue that this makes it even less likely. They should've went past the phase where this happens this hard.
Also, this is the middle of a fucking mission. Where's proper conduct dammit XD
Gonna say it right here, that opening is too lovely dovely in my opinion. I know that they were at it for a while now, but one could argue that this makes it even less likely. They should've went past the phase where this happens this hard.
Also, this is the middle of a fucking mission. Where's proper conduct dammit XD
10/19/2018 c1
1MrSadTeddyBear
One of my favorite pairings, and now one of my favorite small series. Incredibly well done my friend. Incredibly well done. Best wishes and good luck, Sad.

One of my favorite pairings, and now one of my favorite small series. Incredibly well done my friend. Incredibly well done. Best wishes and good luck, Sad.
7/29/2018 c15 notYacob
I'm not normally a reader of teen Titans fanfiction, but I like your Princess of the Blacks series and decided to read your other stuff. I'm glad I did. I started with the What Happens in Vegas and couldn't stop until I read all of the works you've written with Raven. Do you have any recommendations for other demonic Raven works?
I'm not normally a reader of teen Titans fanfiction, but I like your Princess of the Blacks series and decided to read your other stuff. I'm glad I did. I started with the What Happens in Vegas and couldn't stop until I read all of the works you've written with Raven. Do you have any recommendations for other demonic Raven works?
6/4/2018 c11 kyoanna
god this is like the 8th time I've read this and im still in fucking tears at that scene
god this is like the 8th time I've read this and im still in fucking tears at that scene
3/25/2018 c2
2Ms. Rugby
This continues to be one of my favorite series on this site, the darkness and gore delights my little black heart. I’ve commented on this before I believe but just know that I come back to reread it every so often and every time is just as wonderful as the first. I will always take pleasure out of this little story of a powerful half demon and her love. Thank you for sharing this with us :-)

This continues to be one of my favorite series on this site, the darkness and gore delights my little black heart. I’ve commented on this before I believe but just know that I come back to reread it every so often and every time is just as wonderful as the first. I will always take pleasure out of this little story of a powerful half demon and her love. Thank you for sharing this with us :-)
2/20/2018 c15 minerbuilder12
I have probably reread these stories so many times that when i die and my life flashes before my eyes...
A sizable portion will be this.
I have probably reread these stories so many times that when i die and my life flashes before my eyes...
A sizable portion will be this.
1/9/2018 c7 XWingExecuter
I've gotten this far, and it's been a tough slog. This chapter was very difficult to get through, especially at the end. It seems like you are portraying certain characters as bad, like Robin and Starfire. Starfire at least has an attempt at providing a reason, but the one she gives to the Titans is different than what she was thinking, and the one she was thinking was far more logical. To get to the point though, you have character making judgments based off of what they know but are trying to set them up as the bad guys. Because of this, it feels like you are forcing characters to carry out the story you want, even when it goes against the nature of the character.
I've gotten this far, and it's been a tough slog. This chapter was very difficult to get through, especially at the end. It seems like you are portraying certain characters as bad, like Robin and Starfire. Starfire at least has an attempt at providing a reason, but the one she gives to the Titans is different than what she was thinking, and the one she was thinking was far more logical. To get to the point though, you have character making judgments based off of what they know but are trying to set them up as the bad guys. Because of this, it feels like you are forcing characters to carry out the story you want, even when it goes against the nature of the character.
12/19/2017 c14
6OmegaKenichi
*Sees the note about keeping villains alive* THANK YOU! Seriously, that has got to be the stupidest thing in Comic Books everywhere! The fact that comics were the Joker gets killed are in the one percent astounds me

*Sees the note about keeping villains alive* THANK YOU! Seriously, that has got to be the stupidest thing in Comic Books everywhere! The fact that comics were the Joker gets killed are in the one percent astounds me