3/6/2013 c2 5Animemonk
good job and hopefully chapter three comes up soon

2/28/2013 c1 Animemonk
eh not bad kid but if you tried to add more to a chapter and tries to increase the number of words in your story you would get more readers i am sure sice alot of them look for one with more words so it can occupy more free time or just so it isn't so short to them keep trying and please upload soon