for The Ero-Game2/27/2013 c1 bankai777
i hope that shion,amaru,maki,pakura,temari,shizuka,yugito,mei terumi and samui join the harem.
i hope that shion,amaru,maki,pakura,temari,shizuka,yugito,mei terumi and samui join the harem.
2/27/2013 c1 kazumalteractiver
well it's a good start but in this chater you have made 1 error when you said: All stats can be raised through training except luck. because in the end of this you said that Naruto placed fifteen stat points into dexterity, intelligence, LUCK, chakra control, and five points into speed. so if luck can't raised like the rest how can he do it?
well it's a good start but in this chater you have made 1 error when you said: All stats can be raised through training except luck. because in the end of this you said that Naruto placed fifteen stat points into dexterity, intelligence, LUCK, chakra control, and five points into speed. so if luck can't raised like the rest how can he do it?
2/27/2013 c1 Rubicon373
interesting fic, i loved the achievements
the only thing i don't like about it is that Kyuubi is female, i like to think that the Bjuu are genderless, but if female kyuubi is a integral part of this fic then i will deal with it
please tell me Ino, Temari and tenten are part of Naruto's harem
update soon please, i wish to read more
interesting fic, i loved the achievements
the only thing i don't like about it is that Kyuubi is female, i like to think that the Bjuu are genderless, but if female kyuubi is a integral part of this fic then i will deal with it
please tell me Ino, Temari and tenten are part of Naruto's harem
update soon please, i wish to read more
2/27/2013 c1 SkyggeAngelo
hmm, this is interesting cannot wait to see how this goes and who'll be in the harem. keep up the great work
hmm, this is interesting cannot wait to see how this goes and who'll be in the harem. keep up the great work
2/27/2013 c1 iceringX
I think you should continue it from here as the main storyline takes off during wave mission
also this is a pretty good mix of the lemon games and the other naruto gets stuck in game cuz i don't think aside from lemon games there's one where you get bonuses and xp from sex
btw there are some spelling mistakes like it's secret NOT secrete
and it's Kekkei Genkai NOT Keki Genki
other than that it's a good read so far hope u update soon
I think you should continue it from here as the main storyline takes off during wave mission
also this is a pretty good mix of the lemon games and the other naruto gets stuck in game cuz i don't think aside from lemon games there's one where you get bonuses and xp from sex
btw there are some spelling mistakes like it's secret NOT secrete
and it's Kekkei Genkai NOT Keki Genki
other than that it's a good read so far hope u update soon
2/26/2013 c1 MIDKNIGHT The Fallen One
Interesting. I had hoped that Ero-Ninja would restart his story on this site or someone else would make something similar as I liked his story very much. It is nice to see that has happened. Very nice work on the first chapter and starting it here in the Wave arc works well in my opinion.
Interesting. I had hoped that Ero-Ninja would restart his story on this site or someone else would make something similar as I liked his story very much. It is nice to see that has happened. Very nice work on the first chapter and starting it here in the Wave arc works well in my opinion.
2/26/2013 c1 
1ShadowAndrew93
Aww yeah can't wait for the next chapter please update soon and can u give naruto devil arms as well please
1ShadowAndrew93Aww yeah can't wait for the next chapter please update soon and can u give naruto devil arms as well please