for A Pyrrhic Victory11/29/2023 c2 DaughterofAthena
3 words. I. Love. It!
3 words. I. Love. It!
7/11/2019 c18 Guest
Not happening. Calypso fell for Percy big time in BOL. That cannot happen again. And I'm disappointed in Nico. Percy's his cousin. And is Poseidon really dead? Probably not, if he's gonna reveal himself to Percy. And how come Thalia and Nico weren't recruited for the Olympians too. Can you say no fair and no sense?
Not happening. Calypso fell for Percy big time in BOL. That cannot happen again. And I'm disappointed in Nico. Percy's his cousin. And is Poseidon really dead? Probably not, if he's gonna reveal himself to Percy. And how come Thalia and Nico weren't recruited for the Olympians too. Can you say no fair and no sense?
2/14/2017 c12 iTapN Nova
Thief?
Thief?
12/11/2016 c14 
34Nemesis dan Impyrean
I love fics where I can just hate on Annabeth and Thalia and every other ****ing girl! Especially when they accuse him of stuff that weren't his own choices. They're such *****es, you know? And, no, fanfiction isn't censoring my words
34Nemesis dan ImpyreanI love fics where I can just hate on Annabeth and Thalia and every other ****ing girl! Especially when they accuse him of stuff that weren't his own choices. They're such *****es, you know? And, no, fanfiction isn't censoring my words
5/3/2016 c6 jackjones15660
I really wabt an explenation on why Sally would Marry Gabe in this story. It makes no sense if he is not a half blood. Gabe was only their to hide Percys scent.
I really wabt an explenation on why Sally would Marry Gabe in this story. It makes no sense if he is not a half blood. Gabe was only their to hide Percys scent.
2/13/2016 c23 Ghostiesftw
Is the sequel still on hiatus or will it be updated soon? I would appreciate a pm because I enjoyed this story a lot
Is the sequel still on hiatus or will it be updated soon? I would appreciate a pm because I enjoyed this story a lot
1/14/2016 c9 BelieverOfEverything
Did you get Annaneth,s project idea from The Mortal Instruments? You know, Valentine reached Jace that "to love is to destroy"?
Did you get Annaneth,s project idea from The Mortal Instruments? You know, Valentine reached Jace that "to love is to destroy"?
4/8/2015 c18 the Dreamer
I really loved your story until you progressed too much into the relationships. Percy and Annabeth had questions to ask each other and Annabeth doesn't know Grover. She also didn't mention the abuse or other topics Percy mentioned while he was drugged and looked like a blond. You also skipped the training, which I was looking forward to after the cliffhanger about becoming a great swordsman, and totally confused everyone. Now Percy and Annabeth's mother know about the Olympians and the readers have little clue. In addition, Annabeth had no idea about the Olympians and would be confused upon hearing the term "son of the sea". Not just percabeth, but Thalia and Luke also progressed too quickly. Thalia can't be "charmed by his smile" if she is still hurt about his disappearance which US READERS don't know about. You leave out too information and progress too quickly. I had loved the story, but there is too much I'd like to change and cannot keep reading. Please rewrite and don't take this as a negative comment. Thank you and I hope to see more stories.
the Dreamer
I really loved your story until you progressed too much into the relationships. Percy and Annabeth had questions to ask each other and Annabeth doesn't know Grover. She also didn't mention the abuse or other topics Percy mentioned while he was drugged and looked like a blond. You also skipped the training, which I was looking forward to after the cliffhanger about becoming a great swordsman, and totally confused everyone. Now Percy and Annabeth's mother know about the Olympians and the readers have little clue. In addition, Annabeth had no idea about the Olympians and would be confused upon hearing the term "son of the sea". Not just percabeth, but Thalia and Luke also progressed too quickly. Thalia can't be "charmed by his smile" if she is still hurt about his disappearance which US READERS don't know about. You leave out too information and progress too quickly. I had loved the story, but there is too much I'd like to change and cannot keep reading. Please rewrite and don't take this as a negative comment. Thank you and I hope to see more stories.
the Dreamer