for Shelter From the Rain10/30/2013 c1 Guest
Please write a sequel!It's awesome and I want to read more!
Please write a sequel!It's awesome and I want to read more!
6/12/2013 c1 
11Disciple Of The Dragon Star
Lol. The only bit that disgruntles me about this story is that it is a bit hurried or maybe it was just me reading fast. I like the way you slipped in some canon references.
By the way...that "Kurosaki-kun" reference...is it just me or were you poking fun at Orihime...?
11Disciple Of The Dragon StarLol. The only bit that disgruntles me about this story is that it is a bit hurried or maybe it was just me reading fast. I like the way you slipped in some canon references.
By the way...that "Kurosaki-kun" reference...is it just me or were you poking fun at Orihime...?
6/4/2013 c1 saki
*cough cough*.. hello
I am saki. Well, I want to review this story, but sorry for the grammatical error, because english is not my mother-language.
i like this story and i was shocked that ichi was actually near with his apartment. OMG i love it when rukia and ichigo are teasing each other. Hopefully you'd make the second chapter and third, forth and so on. Last, thank you for your work to write this story. aah i did say that i am not a native of english,right? hehe sorry for misspellings and grammatical error
*cough cough*.. hello
I am saki. Well, I want to review this story, but sorry for the grammatical error, because english is not my mother-language.
i like this story and i was shocked that ichi was actually near with his apartment. OMG i love it when rukia and ichigo are teasing each other. Hopefully you'd make the second chapter and third, forth and so on. Last, thank you for your work to write this story. aah i did say that i am not a native of english,right? hehe sorry for misspellings and grammatical error
4/5/2013 c1 auroraesthetic
Ahh
Rukia's mind was always full of I think it chanced with .
It was a quite nice in the end, it feels like there's going to be an other chapter it should be...
Ahh
Rukia's mind was always full of I think it chanced with .
It was a quite nice in the end, it feels like there's going to be an other chapter it should be...
4/1/2013 c1 yuiyuki
Two shots please! Onegai!
Two shots please! Onegai!
3/5/2013 c1 12purplepam
Aww! it was under his apartment? And he stayed there with her? Sooo cute! But I didn't understand how Rukia made him happy.
12purplepamAww! it was under his apartment? And he stayed there with her? Sooo cute! But I didn't understand how Rukia made him happy.
3/1/2013 c1 Nice
I thought that was sweet and simple. I could totally see them acting like that if this was a scene in the anime.
I thought that was sweet and simple. I could totally see them acting like that if this was a scene in the anime.
3/2/2013 c1 27hunterofcomedy
A nice little story. Having a department call "Shinigami" was a bit out there but I'll buy it. It doesn't really seem finished, so I say go for another chapter.
Keep up the great work!
27hunterofcomedyA nice little story. Having a department call "Shinigami" was a bit out there but I'll buy it. It doesn't really seem finished, so I say go for another chapter.
Keep up the great work!
3/1/2013 c1 INACTIVE-apocalyxtic98
Cute! The idea of them meeting under a building in the rain is very romantic, and their interactions are true to their character.
Cute! The idea of them meeting under a building in the rain is very romantic, and their interactions are true to their character.