for All Because of Revenge4/28/2014 c1 
25Codie - King of Hollows
Maybe you can answer a question I have about Renji's release call. WHY does EVERYONE the writes Bleach FanFiction have him say "Howl" when it's ACTUALLY "Roar"? Does almost NO ONE pay attention to the anime? Seriously. EVEN in SUBBED format his Shikai release call is "Roar" not "Howl". Other than THAT annoying inconsistency good story so far.
25Codie - King of HollowsMaybe you can answer a question I have about Renji's release call. WHY does EVERYONE the writes Bleach FanFiction have him say "Howl" when it's ACTUALLY "Roar"? Does almost NO ONE pay attention to the anime? Seriously. EVEN in SUBBED format his Shikai release call is "Roar" not "Howl". Other than THAT annoying inconsistency good story so far.
4/20/2014 c26 nothingnothingnothing1234
You have got to be kidding me, this story is great... but I was hoping for a different ending... I'm a lil' bit disappointed, because however you twist the world, Ichigo nor Byakuya will let Rukia die, just like that.
You have got to be kidding me, this story is great... but I was hoping for a different ending... I'm a lil' bit disappointed, because however you twist the world, Ichigo nor Byakuya will let Rukia die, just like that.
3/1/2014 c26 Guest
I finally regained my love for reading fanfiction and decided to start with Bleach. The Bleach Archive is filled with shit, most of them Yaoi/Yuro or it's in another language. Well guess what? I ran into your profile and I'm sure as hell glad I did do so.
This story is not good but not bad either. It has it's errors (which aren't that bad at all) but then that is just forgotten with the pure epic-ness it has. Woman, you were a beginner when writing this and look how well you did. Most beginners who write stories, make the characters OOC or have terrible grammar.
You on the other hand, handled shit perfectly. Characters weren't OOC, grammar was almost perfect, and the plot was beautifully planned out. Oh, and your characters were awesome as well! I'm serious here, for me to like a fanfic, it has to be really great!
The battle scenes were badass. You, my friend, are great at describing bloody scenes. I could actually picture this all going on in my head, and then snapping back to reality shivering. That shit was gore, man! Are you sure this should be rated T for teens?
The romance had a great pace, but then sort of got bumpy towards the middle, and then regained it's posture. It's nothing bad because I've seen stories that go way too much in the romance. Your romance was good, but then went a little to overboard (as in Hiaru and Soi-Feung [BUT I ENJOYED IT!]). Then it went back to it's regular great pacing.
The flashbacks and backstory were also awesome! Most people don't like that stuff, but I loved it. Gave me more emotions which is pretty hard.
And last but not least, that ending! That ending had me on the edge of my seat. Hell, I still am crying right now. The emotions this story gave me, is an emotion no other story has ever given me.
The character development, the action, the characters! I don't know if you did, but I felt like you put all your strength in this amazing story!
You have great writing skills I wish I could have. Embrace that, my friend. Take that into a whole other level and take pride on it as well. Not everybody is gifted with your skills :)
I'm bookmarking this on my iPhone. If you decide to make more Bleach stories, be sure as hell to see me as one of your followers.
I finally regained my love for reading fanfiction and decided to start with Bleach. The Bleach Archive is filled with shit, most of them Yaoi/Yuro or it's in another language. Well guess what? I ran into your profile and I'm sure as hell glad I did do so.
This story is not good but not bad either. It has it's errors (which aren't that bad at all) but then that is just forgotten with the pure epic-ness it has. Woman, you were a beginner when writing this and look how well you did. Most beginners who write stories, make the characters OOC or have terrible grammar.
You on the other hand, handled shit perfectly. Characters weren't OOC, grammar was almost perfect, and the plot was beautifully planned out. Oh, and your characters were awesome as well! I'm serious here, for me to like a fanfic, it has to be really great!
The battle scenes were badass. You, my friend, are great at describing bloody scenes. I could actually picture this all going on in my head, and then snapping back to reality shivering. That shit was gore, man! Are you sure this should be rated T for teens?
The romance had a great pace, but then sort of got bumpy towards the middle, and then regained it's posture. It's nothing bad because I've seen stories that go way too much in the romance. Your romance was good, but then went a little to overboard (as in Hiaru and Soi-Feung [BUT I ENJOYED IT!]). Then it went back to it's regular great pacing.
The flashbacks and backstory were also awesome! Most people don't like that stuff, but I loved it. Gave me more emotions which is pretty hard.
And last but not least, that ending! That ending had me on the edge of my seat. Hell, I still am crying right now. The emotions this story gave me, is an emotion no other story has ever given me.
The character development, the action, the characters! I don't know if you did, but I felt like you put all your strength in this amazing story!
You have great writing skills I wish I could have. Embrace that, my friend. Take that into a whole other level and take pride on it as well. Not everybody is gifted with your skills :)
I'm bookmarking this on my iPhone. If you decide to make more Bleach stories, be sure as hell to see me as one of your followers.
9/7/2013 c26 7Panda-Angel-Wings
Why? Why did Rukia have to die? This was a beautiful story. I throughly enjoy all of your writing. I loved the Ichruki-ness in this, but oh my god when I found out that Rukia and Soi Fong died, I think that I died a little on the inside. Seriously amazing.
- AngelofDarkus (Laiba)
7Panda-Angel-WingsWhy? Why did Rukia have to die? This was a beautiful story. I throughly enjoy all of your writing. I loved the Ichruki-ness in this, but oh my god when I found out that Rukia and Soi Fong died, I think that I died a little on the inside. Seriously amazing.
- AngelofDarkus (Laiba)
8/25/2013 c1 Runningtheworld1
Yup, I'm officially hooked up!
Yup, I'm officially hooked up!
7/15/2013 c26 Yagami67Ryuuk19
Heey, Jaay-Chan! Sorry if I haven't been reviewing your stories in suuuuuuuuuuch a loooooong time! My family took a one month trip to MAAAH AWESOME COUNTRY, EL SALVADOR! And I finally got Wi-Fi! :-'D It so much fun here...I really don't want to leave but I will in two weeks! Have you ever been here? i'm in San Salvador right now! I grew up here for half my life! :-') Nothing hasn't changed except that it got MORE FREAKING HOT! :-0 It's burning! The food is soooo tasty! Best pupusas and platanos ever! WAAAAAAH! I DON'T WANT TO GOOOO! Sorry about that! :-')
Beautiful and sad ending! I still can't believe you killed my precious rukia! Damn it, I almost freaking cried! It was bloody, painful...wow! Just wow...but at the same time...it was awesome! They admitted they loved each other! :-'( Hiaru and Soi-Feung forever! I SHALL GO DOWN WITH MY SHIP! Great ending...as the saying goes...REVENGE IS A BITCH! It really is...:-P
I'll review Faa-Chan's story and Bulletproof once I come back! Till next time, Jaay-Chan! :-'D
Heey, Jaay-Chan! Sorry if I haven't been reviewing your stories in suuuuuuuuuuch a loooooong time! My family took a one month trip to MAAAH AWESOME COUNTRY, EL SALVADOR! And I finally got Wi-Fi! :-'D It so much fun here...I really don't want to leave but I will in two weeks! Have you ever been here? i'm in San Salvador right now! I grew up here for half my life! :-') Nothing hasn't changed except that it got MORE FREAKING HOT! :-0 It's burning! The food is soooo tasty! Best pupusas and platanos ever! WAAAAAAH! I DON'T WANT TO GOOOO! Sorry about that! :-')
Beautiful and sad ending! I still can't believe you killed my precious rukia! Damn it, I almost freaking cried! It was bloody, painful...wow! Just wow...but at the same time...it was awesome! They admitted they loved each other! :-'( Hiaru and Soi-Feung forever! I SHALL GO DOWN WITH MY SHIP! Great ending...as the saying goes...REVENGE IS A BITCH! It really is...:-P
I'll review Faa-Chan's story and Bulletproof once I come back! Till next time, Jaay-Chan! :-'D
7/13/2013 c1 metsfan101
after reading this first chapter i must say that i am hook. you have my subscription
after reading this first chapter i must say that i am hook. you have my subscription
7/12/2013 c26 Guest
Oh. Cool. She died. He died. Byaku died.
Oh. Cool. She died. He died. Byaku died.
7/7/2013 c26 5TomoMee
awwwwwww left her heart with him! I LOVE YOU! :') this was one of the best stories I've ever encountered! In character and yet! a minute ago, I was gonna go on a rampage cox u made ichi kill her (XD) but now I'm seriously crying my ears out! that was the awesomest ichiruki I've ever read! :'D
5TomoMeeawwwwwww left her heart with him! I LOVE YOU! :') this was one of the best stories I've ever encountered! In character and yet! a minute ago, I was gonna go on a rampage cox u made ichi kill her (XD) but now I'm seriously crying my ears out! that was the awesomest ichiruki I've ever read! :'D
7/6/2013 c26 Karin Hitsugaya
YOU ARE JUST THE BEST, JAAY-CHAN! You really know how to write and end a story! :) This really...wow! I just can'y believe it ended...it felt so fast...GRAAAH! But really, really...GREAT JOB! :D We Arillo have bullet proof to go on :-P We shall continue reading your stories!
YOU ARE JUST THE BEST, JAAY-CHAN! You really know how to write and end a story! :) This really...wow! I just can'y believe it ended...it felt so fast...GRAAAH! But really, really...GREAT JOB! :D We Arillo have bullet proof to go on :-P We shall continue reading your stories!