5/26/2013 c1 mangageek08
WHAT?! NOOOOOOOOO! ALFRED WHHHYYYYYYYY?! HE WAS SO YOUNG! WHHHYYYYYYYY! (TTOTT)
WHAT?! NOOOOOOOOO! ALFRED WHHHYYYYYYYY?! HE WAS SO YOUNG! WHHHYYYYYYYY! (TTOTT)
3/30/2013 c1 Coreofblossom
Well... ._. Actually that was a pretty great story (kudos to you!) but the particular thing i don't like is how this is in a third person's pov and the reader is mentionable with 'her' and 'she'. Other than that, its good!
Well... ._. Actually that was a pretty great story (kudos to you!) but the particular thing i don't like is how this is in a third person's pov and the reader is mentionable with 'her' and 'she'. Other than that, its good!