for Patiently Waiting4/13/2007 c5 
3Kaiyashu
Regaining her breath the young shinobi continued to glare down at her prisioner until she noticed his eyes holding some startled expression that literally screamed 'oh shit!' at her.
Pfft, hahaha! That was totally awesome. I'm glad I swung by to read it. Great writing, my friend. I'm glad you keep Vincent 'real' so to speak, instead of emotionally constipated. Keep up the good work! :D
3KaiyashuRegaining her breath the young shinobi continued to glare down at her prisioner until she noticed his eyes holding some startled expression that literally screamed 'oh shit!' at her.
Pfft, hahaha! That was totally awesome. I'm glad I swung by to read it. Great writing, my friend. I'm glad you keep Vincent 'real' so to speak, instead of emotionally constipated. Keep up the good work! :D
8/1/2006 c5 5Maeve Forest Sage
Can you please please please please please please please please please please update?
pweaase?
5Maeve Forest SageCan you please please please please please please please please please please update?
pweaase?
12/15/2005 c5 b0y1ndah00d
WOW LEMONY FRESH
UM CAJN I JUST BE THE ONE TO SAY THAT FUNNY HAD ME ROLLIN FOO
WOW LEMONY FRESH
UM CAJN I JUST BE THE ONE TO SAY THAT FUNNY HAD ME ROLLIN FOO
4/26/2005 c1 12super-calisto
Hey love the story so far! You so so so have to write some more the chap was the best so far. I read all you chaps in one go! I couldnt stop.
12super-calistoHey love the story so far! You so so so have to write some more the chap was the best so far. I read all you chaps in one go! I couldnt stop.
4/21/2005 c5 Lady Luna
Hee hee...that was a great chapter.
Hee hee...that was a great chapter.
4/20/2005 c5 7Neko-Yuff16
poor vinnie...lol^_^ poor yuffie...^_^ great chapter! update soon! i emphasize on poor vinnie, though...but its obvious why...^_^ ttyl! buh bye!
7Neko-Yuff16poor vinnie...lol^_^ poor yuffie...^_^ great chapter! update soon! i emphasize on poor vinnie, though...but its obvious why...^_^ ttyl! buh bye!
3/17/2005 c2 21Kaj-Nrig
...This is okay. You have a problem with run-on sentences, and you tend to rush everything in general, but I suppose it's forgiveable.
I'm thinking you may have gotten the characterization for Vincent just a tad bit off. I mean his reason for living goes much further than simply avenging Lucrecia's death. He's living to atone for all the stuff that's happened in his past, but mostly to atone for the Lucrecia incident. He wouldn't be thinking about moving on, since, unfortunately, he's way too stuck in the past to do such a thing. It'd have to take somebody (like Yuffie, in this case) to eventually coax him into letting go of the past.
The reason for his coming back (to fight Sephiroth) would definitely have to do with the Planet's survival. He's not so cold as to say that the Planet never did anything for him. If anything, he'd willingly throw his life away for the Planet, so long as he did it without having to go through the little barrier known as society.
Another thing is the present/past tense grammar. Nothing big, but it does start getting to one after a while.
21Kaj-Nrig...This is okay. You have a problem with run-on sentences, and you tend to rush everything in general, but I suppose it's forgiveable.
I'm thinking you may have gotten the characterization for Vincent just a tad bit off. I mean his reason for living goes much further than simply avenging Lucrecia's death. He's living to atone for all the stuff that's happened in his past, but mostly to atone for the Lucrecia incident. He wouldn't be thinking about moving on, since, unfortunately, he's way too stuck in the past to do such a thing. It'd have to take somebody (like Yuffie, in this case) to eventually coax him into letting go of the past.
The reason for his coming back (to fight Sephiroth) would definitely have to do with the Planet's survival. He's not so cold as to say that the Planet never did anything for him. If anything, he'd willingly throw his life away for the Planet, so long as he did it without having to go through the little barrier known as society.
Another thing is the present/past tense grammar. Nothing big, but it does start getting to one after a while.
3/17/2005 c1 1Drywater
You are very wise and rather intuitive as well.. perhaps as Vincent would be? Haha, I wouldn't know, seeing as I've never met him. I enjoyed reading this though, even more so seeing as it focuses in on Vincent and Yuffie. Also, I enjoyed your writing style- less dialogue and more of putting things into retrospect for Vincent. Many writers (including myself...) can't seem to get a hold on his personality and end up making him overly talkative or forward because relaying messages to the reader seems difficult otherwise. Nice work.
1DrywaterYou are very wise and rather intuitive as well.. perhaps as Vincent would be? Haha, I wouldn't know, seeing as I've never met him. I enjoyed reading this though, even more so seeing as it focuses in on Vincent and Yuffie. Also, I enjoyed your writing style- less dialogue and more of putting things into retrospect for Vincent. Many writers (including myself...) can't seem to get a hold on his personality and end up making him overly talkative or forward because relaying messages to the reader seems difficult otherwise. Nice work.
3/17/2005 c1 Grape
Very good so far
Very good so far
3/12/2005 c1 Guest
Write the next chapter!
Write the next chapter!
1/21/2005 c1 Sara
I really like it so far! The begining really pulls you in!
I really like it so far! The begining really pulls you in!
11/11/2004 c2 1Tsukikage Ookami no Ryder
good fic could you continue this plaese? suggestion for the Masion bit make it like his past is going along with the Mansion as well as it burns ok? good? keep up the work on the other fics as well kay?
1Tsukikage Ookami no Rydergood fic could you continue this plaese? suggestion for the Masion bit make it like his past is going along with the Mansion as well as it burns ok? good? keep up the work on the other fics as well kay?
7/3/2003 c2 8GothicDJ
Let's just say that I like your story so much that when there was no more to read, I started cursing. I really loved the author's note in the beginning. For a second, I really thought that it was Vincent talking. It was kind of strange, because I have that same outlook on everything...but I guess that one could put me in that sub-culture of 'goth'. I would love to see more of this story, it's amazing. *clicks 'Add author to my Favorite Authors list' and 'Add story to my Favorite Stories list'* ^^ Eagerly anticipating more.
8GothicDJLet's just say that I like your story so much that when there was no more to read, I started cursing. I really loved the author's note in the beginning. For a second, I really thought that it was Vincent talking. It was kind of strange, because I have that same outlook on everything...but I guess that one could put me in that sub-culture of 'goth'. I would love to see more of this story, it's amazing. *clicks 'Add author to my Favorite Authors list' and 'Add story to my Favorite Stories list'* ^^ Eagerly anticipating more.