for Change for the Better3/12/2013 c1 Jose19
The story has caught my eye but it is realistic in its portrayal of the results of the Fourth Shinobi War which I like because I don't like for Authors to sugar coat what really happened because I still see the results of the original story to be the same because the casualties will be there.
The story has caught my eye but it is realistic in its portrayal of the results of the Fourth Shinobi War which I like because I don't like for Authors to sugar coat what really happened because I still see the results of the original story to be the same because the casualties will be there.
3/12/2013 c2 
1sitrukpc
Keep up the great story. I hope that Naruto and Sakura end up on the same team.
1sitrukpcKeep up the great story. I hope that Naruto and Sakura end up on the same team.
3/6/2013 c1 Random
Love! Love! Love! update soon please! This is gonna be an amazing story!
Love! Love! Love! update soon please! This is gonna be an amazing story!
3/8/2013 c1 Raiza-chan
I know there are a lot of time travel stories here but it's still a great read if the plot is interesting. I'm looking forward to more. :)
I know there are a lot of time travel stories here but it's still a great read if the plot is interesting. I'm looking forward to more. :)
3/4/2013 c1 5Luffy L Deathwalker
Would it kill you to use PAST tense wording in your sentences in terms of said and says you dumbass?
5Luffy L DeathwalkerWould it kill you to use PAST tense wording in your sentences in terms of said and says you dumbass?
3/4/2013 c1 5kidloco
i love it how is went and is good idea make Ino said sorry for her past again because she know how she will be, i think sakura let Ino read her memory to know hw is naruto in true
wow they are in the past now(or in the future) i wait is not that much
is good stuf
question, will be fanservice early or not, i sure they will had love making in the shiputten unless want be more early :hehee
good stuff
5kidlocoi love it how is went and is good idea make Ino said sorry for her past again because she know how she will be, i think sakura let Ino read her memory to know hw is naruto in true
wow they are in the past now(or in the future) i wait is not that much
is good stuf
question, will be fanservice early or not, i sure they will had love making in the shiputten unless want be more early :hehee
good stuff