for Change for the Better8/16/2015 c7 
3samuraipanda85
Kinda undermines their sacrifice to have all the members come back in time.
And having Minato and Kushina back just seems like wish fulfillment. Mikoto is different though. So points for that.
3samuraipanda85Kinda undermines their sacrifice to have all the members come back in time.
And having Minato and Kushina back just seems like wish fulfillment. Mikoto is different though. So points for that.
8/15/2015 c6 samuraipanda85
So it's like Fullmetal Alchemist without the equivalent exchange.
You do alot of explaining in this story. Whether that is a good or a bad thing is up to personal preference.
So it's like Fullmetal Alchemist without the equivalent exchange.
You do alot of explaining in this story. Whether that is a good or a bad thing is up to personal preference.
8/15/2015 c3 samuraipanda85
Ok, we got the backstory out of the way. On to the meat of the fic. I hope.
Ok, we got the backstory out of the way. On to the meat of the fic. I hope.
8/14/2015 c2 samuraipanda85
Ok, we're headed in the right direction. Just gotta make sure we don't retell the same plot lines from the original series with the same outcomes but has a few different lines of dialogue.
Ok, we're headed in the right direction. Just gotta make sure we don't retell the same plot lines from the original series with the same outcomes but has a few different lines of dialogue.
8/14/2015 c1 samuraipanda85
Classic plot, but I always enjoy a good time travel fic. Let's see what you do with it.
Classic plot, but I always enjoy a good time travel fic. Let's see what you do with it.
4/21/2014 c11 Guest
Please update soon,this story is great!
Please update soon,this story is great!
11/23/2013 c5 LovelySheree
Lol, Sarotobi seems to always be okay with letting the ANBU out of his office. What if someone, per say an assassin, came in who was going to assassinate him? Lol, good story, it's awesome!
Lol, Sarotobi seems to always be okay with letting the ANBU out of his office. What if someone, per say an assassin, came in who was going to assassinate him? Lol, good story, it's awesome!