
10/15/2013 c11
3Praelio
Well, I've read everything up until this point. A solid plot line, but your grammar, sentence placing and structure could be better, but otherwise, this is great! Continue soon!

Well, I've read everything up until this point. A solid plot line, but your grammar, sentence placing and structure could be better, but otherwise, this is great! Continue soon!
6/21/2013 c11 tina
love the chapters can't wait to read more :)
love the chapters can't wait to read more :)
6/15/2013 c11 Exxcaliburr
HOLY SHI*T
this is absolutely amazing. Its soooooooooooooooo damn good and i love how Naruto is OP
and to me it looks like Sasuke will be turning good...damn
but your Username says the opposite. Anyways i hope he doesnt become good and something sparks inside of Sasuke and makes him evil
HOLY SHI*T
this is absolutely amazing. Its soooooooooooooooo damn good and i love how Naruto is OP
and to me it looks like Sasuke will be turning good...damn
but your Username says the opposite. Anyways i hope he doesnt become good and something sparks inside of Sasuke and makes him evil
6/15/2013 c4 Exxcaliburr
im in love with this. And i love it even more because your bashing on Sasuke and i assume that you also hate him just like me.
im in love with this. And i love it even more because your bashing on Sasuke and i assume that you also hate him just like me.
6/11/2013 c11 Guest
Hope you update both stories soon
Hope you update both stories soon
6/10/2013 c11 mmat
So that what had happen
So that what had happen
6/10/2013 c11 Guest
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