for Deviant4/5 c24 Janet Garrett
Hey, Guys, this was my 5th Read, and it is just as good as the first time. Trust Me.
Hey, Guys, this was my 5th Read, and it is just as good as the first time. Trust Me.
9/1/2024 c24 
8Heewonjay
I’m happy I found this story after the futuretake was added lol Getting to see how everyone ended up was so nice!
I looove how he tries to reassure her that she’s still got it. And I love that they haven’t outgrown the need to one up eachother lmao. I loved their story but I’ll say bye to these two for now
8HeewonjayI’m happy I found this story after the futuretake was added lol Getting to see how everyone ended up was so nice!
I looove how he tries to reassure her that she’s still got it. And I love that they haven’t outgrown the need to one up eachother lmao. I loved their story but I’ll say bye to these two for now
9/1/2024 c23 Heewonjay
Unpacked boxes in two days? Our Half Pint? Unheard of! So so proud of her and her acceptance of this wonderful life she’s making with her Manchu!
And the ending for house! The cat! The coffee date was the cutest full circle moment! My eyeballs are sweating happy now that everything ended up getting resolved and everyone got the best ending.
Once again I’m attached. I’m so attached! Even more so to their nicknames lol. I’ll admit I wasn’t crazy about the mustache in the beginning because all I could picture was the real manchu lmao but it grew on me and now I don’t want to let it gooo. You get Izzys and Eddies and Bells and Tonys but never has there been a Manchu and Half Pint. They made it! He was already there pretty much since day one just waiting for her to catch up and I’m so glad that she did and in the most dramatic way.
I loved their snarky banter and their insane chemistry. They were MADE for each other. I’m for sure gonna miss these two! I hope they make a buttload of bigheaded and pigheaded kids lmao they deserve it so much! Can’t wait to forget I read this so I can come back and re-read it and fall in love with it all over again!
I loved what a great brother Emmett was to Bella. He was so supportive of her. Like even kicking people out the bar at her request without knowing the whole story but just because that was his sister. I also love that she had such good friends that kept trying to get her to open her eyes and not close herself off. The supporting characters were simply awesome. I loved all their personalities!
Thank you for your words and for creating Manchu and Half Pint. I love them and their names sooo much!
Unpacked boxes in two days? Our Half Pint? Unheard of! So so proud of her and her acceptance of this wonderful life she’s making with her Manchu!
And the ending for house! The cat! The coffee date was the cutest full circle moment! My eyeballs are sweating happy now that everything ended up getting resolved and everyone got the best ending.
Once again I’m attached. I’m so attached! Even more so to their nicknames lol. I’ll admit I wasn’t crazy about the mustache in the beginning because all I could picture was the real manchu lmao but it grew on me and now I don’t want to let it gooo. You get Izzys and Eddies and Bells and Tonys but never has there been a Manchu and Half Pint. They made it! He was already there pretty much since day one just waiting for her to catch up and I’m so glad that she did and in the most dramatic way.
I loved their snarky banter and their insane chemistry. They were MADE for each other. I’m for sure gonna miss these two! I hope they make a buttload of bigheaded and pigheaded kids lmao they deserve it so much! Can’t wait to forget I read this so I can come back and re-read it and fall in love with it all over again!
I loved what a great brother Emmett was to Bella. He was so supportive of her. Like even kicking people out the bar at her request without knowing the whole story but just because that was his sister. I also love that she had such good friends that kept trying to get her to open her eyes and not close herself off. The supporting characters were simply awesome. I loved all their personalities!
Thank you for your words and for creating Manchu and Half Pint. I love them and their names sooo much!
8/31/2024 c22 Heewonjay
The way I need the whole airport part of this chapter to be a scene in a movie but particularly the part where she’s screaming Manchu in a crowded airport lmao
When she brought up the names? Half Pint, we were just spiraling a chapter ago but that’s when I knew Bella was all in. She was fully embracing this life with him. I love! We’ve come so far! In love Bella is the cutest. Ugh, I need to make a dentist appointment for the cavity this chapter gave me from how utterly sweet it was! I loved it so much
I’m giving myself a pat on the back for understanding most of the italian. Thank you to the one year of italian I took in high school forever ago lol
The way I need the whole airport part of this chapter to be a scene in a movie but particularly the part where she’s screaming Manchu in a crowded airport lmao
When she brought up the names? Half Pint, we were just spiraling a chapter ago but that’s when I knew Bella was all in. She was fully embracing this life with him. I love! We’ve come so far! In love Bella is the cutest. Ugh, I need to make a dentist appointment for the cavity this chapter gave me from how utterly sweet it was! I loved it so much
I’m giving myself a pat on the back for understanding most of the italian. Thank you to the one year of italian I took in high school forever ago lol
8/31/2024 c21 Heewonjay
The way i need this whole chapter to be a scene in a movie but particularly the part where she’s screaming Manchu in a crowded airport lmao
Who knew Half Pint had it in her to have the best last minute airport confession ever lol the second she bought that ticket I was like oh, she’s totally going to Italy. I’m happy that Emmett thought the same lolol
My heart is so happy for them right now
The way i need this whole chapter to be a scene in a movie but particularly the part where she’s screaming Manchu in a crowded airport lmao
Who knew Half Pint had it in her to have the best last minute airport confession ever lol the second she bought that ticket I was like oh, she’s totally going to Italy. I’m happy that Emmett thought the same lolol
My heart is so happy for them right now
8/31/2024 c20 Heewonjay
We should create a national holiday to celebrate Alice and Emmett! Cupid may create relationships but these two got Bella’s head out the sand and on her way to save her relationship!
We should create a national holiday to celebrate Alice and Emmett! Cupid may create relationships but these two got Bella’s head out the sand and on her way to save her relationship!
8/31/2024 c19 Heewonjay
Ouchhh. The way im just a pool of sadness right now. The truth came to her when it was too late. Manchu was already pulling out of this. She was just letting him pull away and never said a word to him about her new revelations. And i’m just over here facepalming because she won’t say thing lol That relationship she’s been wanting/needing/looking for is right thereee.
I have faith! She can fix this! Preferably before he finds someone else or drastically decides to stay in Italy *fingers crossed*
Ouchhh. The way im just a pool of sadness right now. The truth came to her when it was too late. Manchu was already pulling out of this. She was just letting him pull away and never said a word to him about her new revelations. And i’m just over here facepalming because she won’t say thing lol That relationship she’s been wanting/needing/looking for is right thereee.
I have faith! She can fix this! Preferably before he finds someone else or drastically decides to stay in Italy *fingers crossed*
8/30/2024 c18 Heewonjay
Oh, it would be so easy to fall. Almost fluff but not enough to keep her anxiety at bay. Its a struggle for her but I wish she would accept that she deserves to be loved! We’ll get there hopefully and if not we’re gonna have to sign her up for therapy or beat up Jake or something lol
Im realizing the other shoe has to drop before we get to the real good stuff. Let me prepare myself for the imminent heartfail.
Oh, it would be so easy to fall. Almost fluff but not enough to keep her anxiety at bay. Its a struggle for her but I wish she would accept that she deserves to be loved! We’ll get there hopefully and if not we’re gonna have to sign her up for therapy or beat up Jake or something lol
Im realizing the other shoe has to drop before we get to the real good stuff. Let me prepare myself for the imminent heartfail.
8/30/2024 c17 Heewonjay
NOOO. NOT THE MANCHU! Instantly remembered she had said she would marry a man with a mustache which caused my eyeballs to start sweating.
A heart to heart finally? Yes yes! They need to break those walls down and get to their hea waiting inside!
Best best best chapter, mhmm. Walls were indeed broken. He said it with his eyes and she let him and then he said it in italian and I knooow she knows. She has to! Because you don’t need an Italian to English dictionary to figure out one of those words lolol
Come on, Half Pint! He’s the right guy. He’s the one. Its himmm. I need her to embrace this and accept it as the truth that it is asap lol
NOOO. NOT THE MANCHU! Instantly remembered she had said she would marry a man with a mustache which caused my eyeballs to start sweating.
A heart to heart finally? Yes yes! They need to break those walls down and get to their hea waiting inside!
Best best best chapter, mhmm. Walls were indeed broken. He said it with his eyes and she let him and then he said it in italian and I knooow she knows. She has to! Because you don’t need an Italian to English dictionary to figure out one of those words lolol
Come on, Half Pint! He’s the right guy. He’s the one. Its himmm. I need her to embrace this and accept it as the truth that it is asap lol
8/30/2024 c16 Heewonjay
We’ll get them on the same page eventually! I’m happy she saw the benefit of him being her date to the wedding! She was finally able to see the doting boyfriend side of him. Did she not invite him in to ensure it didn’t end as an official date and to try to regain their distance? Or because she’s still being a weirdo about her house lol and and annnd HOW did she not cave at the sight of the little half smile he gave her.
I thought he was ghosting her a bit after that to put some distance and protect himself but that call. Hmmm. I feel like the next chapter might be a doozy
We’ll get them on the same page eventually! I’m happy she saw the benefit of him being her date to the wedding! She was finally able to see the doting boyfriend side of him. Did she not invite him in to ensure it didn’t end as an official date and to try to regain their distance? Or because she’s still being a weirdo about her house lol and and annnd HOW did she not cave at the sight of the little half smile he gave her.
I thought he was ghosting her a bit after that to put some distance and protect himself but that call. Hmmm. I feel like the next chapter might be a doozy
8/30/2024 c15 Heewonjay
Yes! I love that it was a simple misunderstanding that was immediately clarified and resolved lol I’m glad he said something and secured the date position because our conflicted girl wasn’t going to say anything and that would’ve hurt my and Edward’s heart lol
Don’t get me wrong, I love me some miscommunication angst for sure but I don’t want Edward’s heart hurt at all lmao. Manchu, get behind me! I’m so so so happy to see some kind of progress with Bella! She ALMOST admitted to herself that she wants to be with him. So close!
Yes! I love that it was a simple misunderstanding that was immediately clarified and resolved lol I’m glad he said something and secured the date position because our conflicted girl wasn’t going to say anything and that would’ve hurt my and Edward’s heart lol
Don’t get me wrong, I love me some miscommunication angst for sure but I don’t want Edward’s heart hurt at all lmao. Manchu, get behind me! I’m so so so happy to see some kind of progress with Bella! She ALMOST admitted to herself that she wants to be with him. So close!
8/30/2024 c13 Heewonjay
So so so close to admitting they have very real feelings for each other. I love how bone-headed they are lol but the moments where he breaks character to check on her or the sweet cheek and forehead kisses. Manchu, PLEASE. My heart can’t take it. I can’t take him being so in love with her when homegirl is still in denial lolol I mean they’re both so closed off but he’s been barely holding it together since day one
So so so close to admitting they have very real feelings for each other. I love how bone-headed they are lol but the moments where he breaks character to check on her or the sweet cheek and forehead kisses. Manchu, PLEASE. My heart can’t take it. I can’t take him being so in love with her when homegirl is still in denial lolol I mean they’re both so closed off but he’s been barely holding it together since day one
8/28/2024 c1 Heewonjay
Okay okay, I’m merely commenting to show my appreciation for “the earth doesnt rotate as slowly as I do, turning on my heel to confront him.” lmfao
Im already having a blast with their love to hate on each other lolol
Okay okay, I’m merely commenting to show my appreciation for “the earth doesnt rotate as slowly as I do, turning on my heel to confront him.” lmfao
Im already having a blast with their love to hate on each other lolol
6/29/2024 c24 PINKSAPPHYR
Still enjoy it as much as the first read all these years ago… I really love these two!
Still enjoy it as much as the first read all these years ago… I really love these two!