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5/29/2019 c17 Charlotte
I really like your story! Can you update it?
5/13/2019 c17 wnig2latybf
Hope you return! This is a unique pairing. I just ask that you PLEASE make this longer.
8/18/2018 c17 595Ghostwriter
Yay! The kiss. Awesome job. Well done.
8/17/2018 c16 2caffinojen
FFN must be acting up again. My review isn't appearing.

I am glad you are back!
8/17/2018 c17 caffinojen
You're back! :D
7/16/2018 c1 stefani
Im feelin' yummy head to toe, you see me
Aint got no patience so lets go, you see me
Look, Im diet drama, wanna spend the night? Dont bring pajamas
Man theres so much heat beneath these clothes,
yeah, you see me...

Walk in the place, they know my face
Encore, sophomore, only one solo, I swore
Big mouth, applause, oh please one more
Wanna hear a bit before I say naw, let me check my itinerary

Umm alright, presto, skin tight, escaped and I risked my life
For what? So I can watch them bite?
Only one Gwen you can find like this
I mean blow your mind like this, your key wont shine like this
If it's yours then you know it wont wind like this, wind it up

Im feelin' yummy head to toe, you see me
Aint got no patience so lets go, you see me
Look, Im diet drama, wanna spend the night? Dont bring pajamas
Man theres so much heat beneath these clothes, you see me

I know youve been waiting but Ive been off making babies
And like a chef making donuts and pastries, its time to make you sweat
Sex and sugar is the flavor, ovens and beaters and graters
Beats made of bongos and shakers, its time to make you sweat

Come on, walk in the place, they know my face
Billionaire Boys, Ice Cream drippin' 'cross the floor
Big house, garage Bentleys, Ferrar
Wanna go before I say naw, let met check my itinerary

Umm alright, G4, G flight, bed in the back so I have a G night
Goodnight, hood right, aint no ***** you can find like this
I mean blow your mind like this, ***** watch dont shine like this
If its ticking then it dont tell time like this

Im feelin' yummy head to toe, you see me
Aint got no patience so lets go, you see me
Look, Im diet drama, wanna spend the night? Dont bring pajamas
Man theres so much heat beneath these clothes, you see me

I know youve been waiting but Ive been off making babies
And like a chef making donuts and pastries, its time to make you sweat
Sex and sugar is the flavor, ovens and beaters and graters
Beats made of bongos and shakers, its time to make you sweat, listen

Now sweat, baby get stupid, jump up, go crazy
L.A.M.B. in 3D, worldwide across your TV
P you crazy, howd you get this? This sounds like disco Tetris
Do I have time to connect this? Let me check my itinerary, umm

I came back for my spotlight
(For her spotlight)
I disappeared like Houdini
(Where Houdini?)
If yours didn't come out right
(If it's not right)
Go to Kinkos and Xerox me

Im feelin' yummy head to toe, you see me
Aint got no patience so lets go, you see me
Look, Im diet drama, wanna spend the night? Dont bring pajamas
Man theres so much heat beneath these clothes, you see me

Im feelin' yummy head to toe, you see me
Aint got no patience so lets go, you see me
Look, Im diet drama, wanna spend the night? Dont bring pajamas
Man theres so much heat beneath these clothes, you see me

I know youve been waiting but Ive been off making babies
And like a chef making donuts and pastries, its time to make you sweat
Sex and sugar is the flavor, ovens and beaters and graters
Beats made of bongos and shakers, its time to make you sweat

Yummy
.
4/29/2018 c16 Guest
Please update...
4/12/2018 c16 Guest
Please update. I need to see how Lucy reacts to this.
3/19/2018 c16 595Ghostwriter
Hey you're back! Good to see you. Oooh, things are heating up. Keep it up.
1/25/2018 c15 Taylor Noelle Hood
are you still writing this? i really want to see lucy and jen meet and talk about that night again.
1/21/2018 c15 A
Look, the chapters are so fucking short! I remember you were around maybe a decade, a decade and half ago... so your writing abilities sure as hell should have improved in that time. I hate Ben but am up for any stories involving Jen the girl whose sister died in the car crash. So if you want me to get invested in this fic, make the chapters longer, elaborate, draw me in, make it interesting. Even my retarded neighbor can do better than this shit.
1/16/2018 c15 Brook-Lucas-Fan-23
This chapter was really great
1/16/2018 c15 Ghostwriter
Oooh! He put two and two together! Awesome work. Keep it up.
10/31/2017 c14 JNM
I care more about Jen's anguish over Sarah's death than her relationship with Ben. But I really like this story nonetheless.
10/30/2017 c14 Ghostwriter
Very emotional chapter. I love it.
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