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3/6/2013 c1 4SMackedCaskett
Oh my, so adorable! :)

I like what you did with the two toys ;)
3/5/2013 c1 LawandOrderForeverCSI
Loved the beginning lily! Please continue!
3/5/2013 c1 14Ballettmaus
And now it's back... Anyway, thanks for the dedication. I really enjoyed... being a witness to the changes and how it all came together; I love what chapter 1 has become, I feel that the decoration of the Christmas tree has added so much to the whole story and I also feel that the "darker" sides don't overpower anymore and are just right!
The details work really well, all of them, I don't think that anything's standing out but I like them all because they come together even better, the descriptions work great and it all creates a very good atmosphere of what Christmas is all about for children and it draws me into the story really well. I feel it captures what Christmas is all about and somehow, even though I've never been there, it sort of makes it seem like the situation Stella is in, is a situation we all have been in at one point in our childhood, in whatever way that may have been :-) In simpler words, I think, it's very easy to relate to what's happening. And, of course, I love the little magic at the end of it (and, naturally, the mentioning of the snow at the beginning) :-D
3/5/2013 c1 116ChibiDawn23
What an adorable start. Little Stella with a massive amount of curls, and ever still the fiery Grecian goddess.
There's a ton of new snow here and it's pretty much the perfect weather to read a Christmas story in :)
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