for Driven5/18/2016 c1 Animecartooncomicgirl
Awsome loved it is there a squeal becuse i would love to see her fathers reaction to johan smith being alive and being marred to his child
Awsome loved it is there a squeal becuse i would love to see her fathers reaction to johan smith being alive and being marred to his child
7/23/2013 c1 
11Adriannu255
And this is the true ending of Pocahontas 2! The only reason we don't get to see it is because Executive Meddling got in the way! XD
11Adriannu255And this is the true ending of Pocahontas 2! The only reason we don't get to see it is because Executive Meddling got in the way! XD
3/12/2013 c1 6RhapsodyinB
In my mind, Pocahontas had to be "mad" to just dump Smith so bluntly in the sequel. At least John has a chance to redeem himself a bit more, here.
6RhapsodyinBIn my mind, Pocahontas had to be "mad" to just dump Smith so bluntly in the sequel. At least John has a chance to redeem himself a bit more, here.
3/7/2013 c1 Guest
One question: do they live in England or Virginia after the wedding?
One question: do they live in England or Virginia after the wedding?
3/7/2013 c1 thornfield
Marvelous plot line. But for a few awkward sentences it was wonderful! DEFINITELY how the first film should have ended . . . good psychological insight into Pocahontas' mind. The chronic insomnia as a trigger for irrationality was a brilliant touch. John was pretty forward and physical before he realized she was chronically sleep deprived.
Marvelous plot line. But for a few awkward sentences it was wonderful! DEFINITELY how the first film should have ended . . . good psychological insight into Pocahontas' mind. The chronic insomnia as a trigger for irrationality was a brilliant touch. John was pretty forward and physical before he realized she was chronically sleep deprived.
3/7/2013 c1 173HC247
Aw, you're too sweet. It's good to know my nagging paid off though:) It gives me something to do besides read cases
Speaking of paying off...
HOLY FREAKING CRAP, WOMAN! You've been holding out on us! Where did this come from?
Seriously, this is probably THE BEST thing you've written to date. So emotionally gripping and realistic. And, like all good Pocahontas fic, rectifies that horrendous sequel (which shall not be named).
Amazing, amazing job. Definitely worth the wait and all my whining :)
173HC247Aw, you're too sweet. It's good to know my nagging paid off though:) It gives me something to do besides read cases
Speaking of paying off...
HOLY FREAKING CRAP, WOMAN! You've been holding out on us! Where did this come from?
Seriously, this is probably THE BEST thing you've written to date. So emotionally gripping and realistic. And, like all good Pocahontas fic, rectifies that horrendous sequel (which shall not be named).
Amazing, amazing job. Definitely worth the wait and all my whining :)