7/26/2021 c2 10Firestar001
I can’t believe I missed this. So an idea for the weapons could be linked to the personality and Jutsu of the mate.
Like Hinata could be... I wanna say sight-sharing. Like Pein does with his clones, but it would just be with Hinata (and possibly the other mates) but it would have to be ‘toggled’. OR since Hinata wants to protect people, the ability for Naruko to ‘take’ some damage from her mates or project a shield around herself or mates in case of some heavy-duty jutsu or the mate is paralyzed in terror.
Haku could be a FEW ice jutsu with the ability to create ice-greaves for kicks and such. Or ice senbon like in the Land of Snow movie. The special power could be a ‘hidden blizzard’. Like Zabuza’s hidden mist only while it’s not as thick, it’s definitely COLD. This ability would be a waiting game but if you’re fighting, your sweat freezes and muscles tense up, you become slower than normal, shivering happens. Basically stand in a freezer at a grocery store while in shorts and a t-shirt; now imagine trying to FIGHT while even colder than that.
IF Yugito Nii (The two tailed cat) comes into play; a lightning cloak. It could look like a literal cloak or like the fox’s cloak, but it’s mid-level lightning style backlash at anyone trying to grapple with her. Weapon COULD be a... cat-o-nine-tails whip... (or just be two tails).
Obviously if you choose any of them, she’s going to need people to teach her how to use the jutsu. Not gonna be done in a week (even with shadow clones).
I do hope these ideas will inspire you to continue.
I can’t believe I missed this. So an idea for the weapons could be linked to the personality and Jutsu of the mate.
Like Hinata could be... I wanna say sight-sharing. Like Pein does with his clones, but it would just be with Hinata (and possibly the other mates) but it would have to be ‘toggled’. OR since Hinata wants to protect people, the ability for Naruko to ‘take’ some damage from her mates or project a shield around herself or mates in case of some heavy-duty jutsu or the mate is paralyzed in terror.
Haku could be a FEW ice jutsu with the ability to create ice-greaves for kicks and such. Or ice senbon like in the Land of Snow movie. The special power could be a ‘hidden blizzard’. Like Zabuza’s hidden mist only while it’s not as thick, it’s definitely COLD. This ability would be a waiting game but if you’re fighting, your sweat freezes and muscles tense up, you become slower than normal, shivering happens. Basically stand in a freezer at a grocery store while in shorts and a t-shirt; now imagine trying to FIGHT while even colder than that.
IF Yugito Nii (The two tailed cat) comes into play; a lightning cloak. It could look like a literal cloak or like the fox’s cloak, but it’s mid-level lightning style backlash at anyone trying to grapple with her. Weapon COULD be a... cat-o-nine-tails whip... (or just be two tails).
Obviously if you choose any of them, she’s going to need people to teach her how to use the jutsu. Not gonna be done in a week (even with shadow clones).
I do hope these ideas will inspire you to continue.
2/2/2021 c2 2Mike Kromer
Definitely interesting, must have more asap. love it so far, keep it up. can't wait to see what happens next.
Definitely interesting, must have more asap. love it so far, keep it up. can't wait to see what happens next.
9/2/2020 c2 70Poke'boy24
This was nice and I hope you continue this since I can't wait to see what kind of chaos Naruko and Kiza cook up next.
This was nice and I hope you continue this since I can't wait to see what kind of chaos Naruko and Kiza cook up next.
5/21/2020 c1 ImCritic
This might’ve been the most cringe fanfic I’ve read so far, god why does fucking give you magic guns?
This might’ve been the most cringe fanfic I’ve read so far, god why does fucking give you magic guns?
4/8/2020 c2 Yeetus
i read this because i was intrigued because of the genderbend and i got triple- no quadruple the story i expected and i hope there will be an update soon!
i read this because i was intrigued because of the genderbend and i got triple- no quadruple the story i expected and i hope there will be an update soon!
2/28/2020 c2 Irina Akashira
Have you ever any aim to continue this story?
Othercase, you should say "cancelled"
Have you ever any aim to continue this story?
Othercase, you should say "cancelled"
1/21/2020 c2 1Umbra Lycan
I hope you continue this story, I find it a unique twist on naruto but a good twist
I hope you continue this story, I find it a unique twist on naruto but a good twist
6/16/2019 c2 Borello
this sound interesting.
this sound interesting.