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4/12/2013 c11 nannyg43
Please don't give up on writing! Your story has a sweetness to it and I totally admire your ability to capture the tone of Peter and El as parents, Including the almost fight over who was at fault for Neal's injuries. I love reading stories about babies so that's just me, but you should write what moves you to write and people can read it or not. Thicker skin means you realize not everyone can be pleased, so please yourself!
4/12/2013 c1 brielle17

Ich liebe deine Geschichte, auch wenn ich sie nur mit Hilfe von GoogleTranslate lesen kann.

You have a Fan in Germany. I love your Story, Please let Neal live a life for baby to teen to adult..
Im sorry for bad englisch. Please more Chapter ... very more.

So jetzt nochmal in Deutsch. Du hast einen Fan in Deutschland der deine Geschichte liebt. Bittel lass Neal aufwachsen von einen Baby über Jugendlichen bis Erwachsenen, Ich freue mich auf vieile neue Kapitel. Lass dich nicht von irgendwelchen Blödianen verunsichern. Ich erwarte, dass du bald weiterschreibst. Ich bin gespannt wie es weitergeht.


4/12/2013 c11 97peppe1951
I think you should keep Neal a two year old as long as YOU are doing a great job with your first story and I love the two year old Neal. I do wonder if he will "grow up" soon and if he does will he remember all of the care Peter and El have done with him or to him and if he will be embarrassed by it as an adult.
4/12/2013 c11 2Grayce07
I like reading with him as a young child, I dont think it has run its course at all. There is still lots of things Id like to eg his first christmas with them. Please don't change him back to a grown up yet!
4/12/2013 c11 gtbee8
I like the story. I enjoy Neal as a baby. If they don't like the story they don't have to read it. Keep writing baby Neal please.
4/12/2013 c11 superlockedgirl
I love this story and baby!Neal is one of my favorite type of stories. I really hope you continue with this story the way that it is!
4/12/2013 c11 caseylf123
I love Neal as a baby! And remember, this is Neal. There is sooooooooo...much mischief he can get into. And when that runs it's course, you can always have him return to his old self. Peter and Elizabeth have changed his diaper. There are oh so many issues they would have to come to terms with as they try to return to their normal life. Use your imagination. Have a ball. You're doing a great job. And remember-there are always going to be people who will criticize what you do. Don't let them squelch your creativity. Do what makes YOU happy. There will also always be people who will appreciate what you do-I know I do!
4/12/2013 c11 4Midlo
YOUR story is wonderful. I apologize. I am terrible at reviewing because I only get to read when I have a few minutes from work.

Do not let other people dictate to you how to write. YOU decide. I have enjoyed it tremendously so far.
4/12/2013 c11 5BondWoman007
I really like this story! Honestly I don't think I could ever get sick of baby Neal ;) My opinion is for you to decide where you want to take this story and then just do it. I think readers can pick up on when a writer doesn't know what they want for the story and it will tend to make it feel like the story is dragging on too much. However, if you have a clear idea of where you're going with it, that will come across.

I hope you choose to continue this story!
4/12/2013 c11 duffer1960
Please continue with this story. I LOVE a de-aged Neal. You can let him grow up SLOWLY. I would love to see Peter and Elizabeth deal with Neal's first day of daycare or school. Also, how are they going to deal with disciplining him. I would also like to see more with Mozzie, Diana & Jones. Thank you.
4/12/2013 c11 7tinyinara
What! People who are sending you negative PMS saying your story has run its course are a) out of line, b) rude, and c) wrong. If they don't like it they can stop reading, but there are plenty of people who do like it. I personally would happily read about baby Neal for longer, or you could skip to a year in the future and three year old Neal who would be adorable (and naughty probably). Or you could deage Mozzie too, or you could join Peter in the hunt for a cure. But I'm loving it as it is. People always have unpleasant things to say - ignore them.

And also, this is great for a first fan fiction, better than a lot of other writers on this site.
4/9/2013 c10 Peppe1951
Awwwww...heart warming chapter
4/11/2013 c10 8sugarart
Awwwwwwwwww! It is so cute
4/10/2013 c10 9nycwc
Cute! To cute!
4/10/2013 c10 3HighOnAWindyHill
Aww! :)) I'm literaly tearing up right now lol! This is soo sweet33 You are such a good writer! I can't explain how happy i am when you update this:D Truly adorable story! Can't wait for more! 3
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