4/12/2013 c11 nannyg43
Please don't give up on writing! Your story has a sweetness to it and I totally admire your ability to capture the tone of Peter and El as parents, Including the almost fight over who was at fault for Neal's injuries. I love reading stories about babies so that's just me, but you should write what moves you to write and people can read it or not. Thicker skin means you realize not everyone can be pleased, so please yourself!

4/12/2013 c11 97peppe1951
I think you should keep Neal a two year old as long as YOU want...you are doing a great job with your first story and I love the two year old Neal. I do wonder if he will "grow up" soon and if he does will he remember all of the care Peter and El have done with him or to him and if he will be embarrassed by it as an adult.

4/12/2013 c11 gtbee8
I like the story. I enjoy Neal as a baby. If they don't like the story they don't have to read it. Keep writing baby Neal please.

4/12/2013 c11 caseylf123
I love Neal as a baby! And remember, this is Neal. There is sooooooooo...much mischief he can get into. And when that runs it's course, you can always have him return to his old self. Peter and Elizabeth have changed his diaper. There are oh so many issues they would have to come to terms with as they try to return to their normal life. Use your imagination. Have a ball. You're doing a great job. And remember-there are always going to be people who will criticize what you do. Don't let them squelch your creativity. Do what makes YOU happy. There will also always be people who will appreciate what you do-I know I do!

4/12/2013 c11 5BondWoman007
I really like this story! Honestly I don't think I could ever get sick of baby Neal ;) My opinion is for you to decide where you want to take this story and then just do it. I think readers can pick up on when a writer doesn't know what they want for the story and it will tend to make it feel like the story is dragging on too much. However, if you have a clear idea of where you're going with it, that will come across.

I hope you choose to continue this story!

4/12/2013 c11 7tinyinara
What! People who are sending you negative PMS saying your story has run its course are a) out of line, b) rude, and c) wrong. If they don't like it they can stop reading, but there are plenty of people who do like it. I personally would happily read about baby Neal for longer, or you could skip to a year in the future and three year old Neal who would be adorable (and naughty probably). Or you could deage Mozzie too, or you could join Peter in the hunt for a cure. But I'm loving it as it is. People always have unpleasant things to say - ignore them.

And also, this is great for a first fan fiction, better than a lot of other writers on this site.

4/11/2013 c10 8sugarart
Awwwwwwwwww! It is so cute

4/10/2013 c10 3HighOnAWindyHill
Aww! :)) I'm literaly tearing up right now lol! This is soo sweet33 You are such a good writer! I can't explain how happy i am when you update this:D Truly adorable story! Can't wait for more! 3