for THE CUTEST CRIMINAL
84/8/2016 c14 JimChou
Just read the whole story. So cute and funny and all over loveable. I know it's a long time now and you haven't updated. It's a pity because your writing is quite good; I've read a lot of fanfic here and your skills are quite on the upper range; good plot, easy to read, descriptions and dialogs spot on. We are here for entertainment and you bring what is needed after a day at work. I hope you didn't stop because of some bad messages; be sure many people would follow your story again if you would give it a try. You could have Neal grow up a few years at a time (like he is two when they put him to sleep and is four when he wakes up in the morning and so on). You could also imagine what's up with the box. Thanks. And I wish you all the best.
Just read the whole story. So cute and funny and all over loveable. I know it's a long time now and you haven't updated. It's a pity because your writing is quite good; I've read a lot of fanfic here and your skills are quite on the upper range; good plot, easy to read, descriptions and dialogs spot on. We are here for entertainment and you bring what is needed after a day at work. I hope you didn't stop because of some bad messages; be sure many people would follow your story again if you would give it a try. You could have Neal grow up a few years at a time (like he is two when they put him to sleep and is four when he wakes up in the morning and so on). You could also imagine what's up with the box. Thanks. And I wish you all the best.
4/8/2016 c4 JimChou
So cute and quite in character as well! Just don't understand why Peter disposed of the box so soon; Neal could have played house or castle or whatever for ages with it!
So cute and quite in character as well! Just don't understand why Peter disposed of the box so soon; Neal could have played house or castle or whatever for ages with it!