for THE CUTEST CRIMINAL4/16/2013 c12 Marie Twinchester
I love this story! So cute! Referring to your request for suggestions at the end of the last chapter: I'd like for Neal to stay de aged. But grow up a bit. Maybe some stories of him thought out the years, starting school and such. Anyway, great story! I love it!
I love this story! So cute! Referring to your request for suggestions at the end of the last chapter: I'd like for Neal to stay de aged. But grow up a bit. Maybe some stories of him thought out the years, starting school and such. Anyway, great story! I love it!
4/14/2013 c12 Guest
Oh funny, and so true, out of the mouth of kids...
Oh funny, and so true, out of the mouth of kids...
4/16/2013 c12 
5BondWoman007
I am very happy to see you decided to continue this story! I loved this chapter and thought the whole potty training aspect of it was cute and hillarious!
5BondWoman007I am very happy to see you decided to continue this story! I loved this chapter and thought the whole potty training aspect of it was cute and hillarious!
4/14/2013 c12 Guest
This was adorable. Don't give up on this story.
This was adorable. Don't give up on this story.
4/14/2013 c12 Stroma
Very good story. Kids do like to ask questions.
Very good story. Kids do like to ask questions.
4/13/2013 c12 Guest
hehe this was cute
hehe this was cute
4/13/2013 c12 peppe1951
I just loved the questions Neal asked about hair down there and if mommy had them too...Peter is going to need two very stiff drinks after this...
I just loved the questions Neal asked about hair down there and if mommy had them too...Peter is going to need two very stiff drinks after this...
4/13/2013 c12 lovencis
Fun chapter! Loved it!
Fun chapter! Loved it!
4/13/2013 c11 lovencis
I have enjoy the deaging thing. Write what u feel like writing. Its seems good.
I have enjoy the deaging thing. Write what u feel like writing. Its seems good.
4/13/2013 c11 stephaniemn5
I really like the story. De-aged Neal is adorable. It would be nice for him to have a good childhood.
I really like the story. De-aged Neal is adorable. It would be nice for him to have a good childhood.
4/13/2013 c11 Stroma
Listen to the reviews. Write what you want to and don't listen to what some people want. It's your story so develop the characters the way you want to. I like 2 year old Neal and want to read more about him. However it is your story so do what you want, I'll still read it.
Listen to the reviews. Write what you want to and don't listen to what some people want. It's your story so develop the characters the way you want to. I like 2 year old Neal and want to read more about him. However it is your story so do what you want, I'll still read it.
4/12/2013 c11 Guest
I have enjoyed your story. I hope you keep it going.
I have enjoyed your story. I hope you keep it going.
4/12/2013 c11 sc
Hey I love your story keep going! I love neal as a child and peter and el make such cute parents. I say don't change him back let him have his little family. You could always make Mozzie his "older" brother. Ignore the negative private messages. Your writing keeps improving and anyone who reads this can see how much passion you put into it. There will always be people who want to put others down, just use those people has a new way to appreciate the good reviews. Keep it going you're doing so great!
Hey I love your story keep going! I love neal as a child and peter and el make such cute parents. I say don't change him back let him have his little family. You could always make Mozzie his "older" brother. Ignore the negative private messages. Your writing keeps improving and anyone who reads this can see how much passion you put into it. There will always be people who want to put others down, just use those people has a new way to appreciate the good reviews. Keep it going you're doing so great!