for Chemical Rebound3/10/2018 c6 
71CanzetYote
I have some questions about this scene:
"He closed his eyes and let a single tear slip down his muzzle at the desperate hope that was laden in that one, pleading inquiry"
1. When Jack cried, did his tear specifically slip down:
A: The bridge of his muzzle and onto the tip of his nose as he hung his head
or
B: The side of his muzzle diagonally and onto his lower jaw and chin
2. Exactly how would Jack react and what would he say to me if I hugged him myself, rubbed his back and licked that tear slipping down his muzzle with my tongue during the scene where he cried? Because every time I read that, I fantasize licking every last tear from Jack's muzzle.
3. Dumb question but on a scale from 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, how salty would Jack's tear taste on my tongue if I licked it directly from his muzzle?
4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being freezing cold and 10 being scalding hot, how warm was that tear slipping down Jack's muzzle?
I know these questions sound weird but please please PLEASE reply back!
71CanzetYoteI have some questions about this scene:
"He closed his eyes and let a single tear slip down his muzzle at the desperate hope that was laden in that one, pleading inquiry"
1. When Jack cried, did his tear specifically slip down:
A: The bridge of his muzzle and onto the tip of his nose as he hung his head
or
B: The side of his muzzle diagonally and onto his lower jaw and chin
2. Exactly how would Jack react and what would he say to me if I hugged him myself, rubbed his back and licked that tear slipping down his muzzle with my tongue during the scene where he cried? Because every time I read that, I fantasize licking every last tear from Jack's muzzle.
3. Dumb question but on a scale from 1 to 10 with 10 being the saltiest, how salty would Jack's tear taste on my tongue if I licked it directly from his muzzle?
4. On a scale from 1 to 10 with 1 being freezing cold and 10 being scalding hot, how warm was that tear slipping down Jack's muzzle?
I know these questions sound weird but please please PLEASE reply back!
5/9/2016 c1 iriasavel
He estado pensando y tengo un pregunta sobre raf, el es un hÃbrido entre un conejo hembra y un zorro macho, ese significa que puede tener hijos por su parte conejo hembra? O en su parte zorro macho es dominante?
He estado pensando y tengo un pregunta sobre raf, el es un hÃbrido entre un conejo hembra y un zorro macho, ese significa que puede tener hijos por su parte conejo hembra? O en su parte zorro macho es dominante?
11/28/2015 c6 berryboychris
This story is so good please don't end it, or give it up. Even if it takes forever to update just keep writing more.
This story is so good please don't end it, or give it up. Even if it takes forever to update just keep writing more.
3/30/2015 c1 AzazelLuciferDeathCrowley
I suggest that rafe escape but jack doesnt ends up being treated as a pet/attack panther trained by cons stuck in his beast form
I suggest that rafe escape but jack doesnt ends up being treated as a pet/attack panther trained by cons stuck in his beast form
9/17/2014 c6 7Arivania Moons
Aww! You should continue this one! It's nice how Soundwave and Jack are sorta-bonding! (not in the romantic way either! *glare*) It's really cute!
7Arivania MoonsAww! You should continue this one! It's nice how Soundwave and Jack are sorta-bonding! (not in the romantic way either! *glare*) It's really cute!
8/5/2014 c6 Guest
Please continue !
Please continue !
5/4/2014 c1 Angel Heart
Hi, I haven't readying story, but your description is asking for plot devices, have your protagonists and their powers discovered by bad guys, Decpticons, M.E.C.H. (that human organization that pulled breakdown apart in TF:P, I don't quite remember their acronym) or you could make up a badguy organization.
With the bad guys; have spy's sent in to the protagonist place, have them discovered, or not.
Have the bad guys try to kidnap your protagonist, not every chapter, or it will seem like a G1 cartoon episode (which may or may not be bad). But make it a point that they want to find out how you protagonists have their powers and how they could use the powers for themselves.
Have interaction between normal people and your protagonists, and interaction between, bot and protagonist, and protagonist with protagonist. It will help develop a world around your story that will help you write more because their is more.
Let your protagonists have at least one doubt, fear, and/or weakness about somthing, everyone in real life has those, so if your protagonist have one they seem more real and you can have your bad guy find out about issomehow and use it to their advantage to try and hurt your protagonist.
Im just spouting out ideas here, use them or not, it's up to you.
A.H.
Hi, I haven't readying story, but your description is asking for plot devices, have your protagonists and their powers discovered by bad guys, Decpticons, M.E.C.H. (that human organization that pulled breakdown apart in TF:P, I don't quite remember their acronym) or you could make up a badguy organization.
With the bad guys; have spy's sent in to the protagonist place, have them discovered, or not.
Have the bad guys try to kidnap your protagonist, not every chapter, or it will seem like a G1 cartoon episode (which may or may not be bad). But make it a point that they want to find out how you protagonists have their powers and how they could use the powers for themselves.
Have interaction between normal people and your protagonists, and interaction between, bot and protagonist, and protagonist with protagonist. It will help develop a world around your story that will help you write more because their is more.
Let your protagonists have at least one doubt, fear, and/or weakness about somthing, everyone in real life has those, so if your protagonist have one they seem more real and you can have your bad guy find out about issomehow and use it to their advantage to try and hurt your protagonist.
Im just spouting out ideas here, use them or not, it's up to you.
A.H.
5/5/2014 c6 24ArmorOfDay
Poor Soundwave, his spark broken up like that. I hope he and Raf will both be okay.
24ArmorOfDayPoor Soundwave, his spark broken up like that. I hope he and Raf will both be okay.
5/4/2014 c6 37Asher Tye
Still an interesting read. Usually its Raf I see bonding with Soundwave, so its an unique twist to see it be Jack this time. Wonder if SW will get into trouble for this. And why is Raf's beast form suffering so much? So many mysteries. Until next update, Ciao for Now.
37Asher TyeStill an interesting read. Usually its Raf I see bonding with Soundwave, so its an unique twist to see it be Jack this time. Wonder if SW will get into trouble for this. And why is Raf's beast form suffering so much? So many mysteries. Until next update, Ciao for Now.
3/31/2014 c5 H
OH and i forget, please i beg you for the love of all that's good and holly, no pairing between the kids and the cons(unless it's Airachnid), that would would be too creepy.
OH and i forget, please i beg you for the love of all that's good and holly, no pairing between the kids and the cons(unless it's Airachnid), that would would be too creepy.