8/25/2022 c5 Speed car
Oh boy, I got to break to break it, you are a pro at fight scenes, I was say that this was my favourite part in chapter 5 :)
Oh boy, I got to break to break it, you are a pro at fight scenes, I was say that this was my favourite part in chapter 5 :)
10/20/2017 c4 120Rookblonkorules
So... I skimmed this chapter once things started getting suggestive, but if this chapter has what I think it has, then it needs a warning beforehand. That kind of thing can be triggering.
So... I skimmed this chapter once things started getting suggestive, but if this chapter has what I think it has, then it needs a warning beforehand. That kind of thing can be triggering.
10/20/2017 c2 Rookblonkorules
Omgsh, your action scene was incredibly intense! Not to mention this cliffhanger!
Omgsh, your action scene was incredibly intense! Not to mention this cliffhanger!
8/1/2013 c8 DrawerofDoodles
Clearly people are just too ignorant to see how amazing this story is. You've managed to create a real sort of depth and meaningfulness to this story with a simple, not too over the top descriptive, writing style. It really does amaze me how well you developed Arcee and Wheeljack's relationship throughout this story as well. Though other people may not see it, I honestly think this story of yours deserves some sort of an award! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work... may I suggest a possible sequel for this particular story?
Clearly people are just too ignorant to see how amazing this story is. You've managed to create a real sort of depth and meaningfulness to this story with a simple, not too over the top descriptive, writing style. It really does amaze me how well you developed Arcee and Wheeljack's relationship throughout this story as well. Though other people may not see it, I honestly think this story of yours deserves some sort of an award! I'm looking forward to reading more of your work... may I suggest a possible sequel for this particular story?
7/9/2013 c8 Autobot S. Star
Yay for them!
Yay for them!
7/8/2013 c8 Forged-of-Fire
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! This chapter... I- I love everything about it. Except that it's the last one. ;-;
It was a great ending though! O.O
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH! This chapter... I- I love everything about it. Except that it's the last one. ;-;
It was a great ending though! O.O