for What Little Femmes are Made Of7/5/2013 c7 Forged-of-Fire
You're such an amazing writer! I love this story almost as much as land of confusion! (... It's just that that one's got Smokescreen in it...)
You're such an amazing writer! I love this story almost as much as land of confusion! (... It's just that that one's got Smokescreen in it...)
6/18/2013 c6 
222Tame a River
I like this Arcee-Wheeljack pairing. Wouldn't be surprised if this couple become canon in the TFP episodes. Keep writing! You are very gifted! :)
222Tame a RiverI like this Arcee-Wheeljack pairing. Wouldn't be surprised if this couple become canon in the TFP episodes. Keep writing! You are very gifted! :)
6/9/2013 c6 UTHEMAN
It's criminal how little Reviews this story has, Honestly people don't know a Good story when they see.
It has a wonderful Narrative, The way You written the character is Simply amazing, It feels like you are ready letting them have a chance to grow.
And now you're bringing new Idea To the pot but it doesn't Feel Out of place,
That's kind of hard to do.
But I must say the ideas of the books Things is awesome and makes total sense.
Also they something I want to tell you It's kind of funny, Because Every time I read this story I'm listening to some kind of scary Video in the background. Like the first five chapters I was watching Lotus prince Play this Interesting little PC game Call Whiteday a labyrinth named school it Kind of a long Name But a fun game.
When I got to the six chapter,
I've Just finished watching John Carpenter's The Thing So I was Listening to Special Features It made me laugh When Jack was reading the Story But I has This helpless feeling Throughout the entire chapter And thinking about that movie only made it Worse.
I've rambled on long enough So let me just say one last thing, Me and Wheeljack Do the exact same, thing When my sister was reading books to me before going to bed.
"Sigh" And you know what I said after Every chapter? Just one More please It's not that late.
UTHEMAN
It's criminal how little Reviews this story has, Honestly people don't know a Good story when they see.
It has a wonderful Narrative, The way You written the character is Simply amazing, It feels like you are ready letting them have a chance to grow.
And now you're bringing new Idea To the pot but it doesn't Feel Out of place,
That's kind of hard to do.
But I must say the ideas of the books Things is awesome and makes total sense.
Also they something I want to tell you It's kind of funny, Because Every time I read this story I'm listening to some kind of scary Video in the background. Like the first five chapters I was watching Lotus prince Play this Interesting little PC game Call Whiteday a labyrinth named school it Kind of a long Name But a fun game.
When I got to the six chapter,
I've Just finished watching John Carpenter's The Thing So I was Listening to Special Features It made me laugh When Jack was reading the Story But I has This helpless feeling Throughout the entire chapter And thinking about that movie only made it Worse.
I've rambled on long enough So let me just say one last thing, Me and Wheeljack Do the exact same, thing When my sister was reading books to me before going to bed.
"Sigh" And you know what I said after Every chapter? Just one More please It's not that late.
UTHEMAN
6/8/2013 c6 UTHEMAN
It's criminal how little Reviews this story has, Honestly people don't know a Good story when they see.
It has a wonderful Narrative, The way You written the character is Simply amazing, It feels like you are ready letting them have a chance to grow.
And now you're bringing new Idea To the pot but it doesn't Feel Out of place,
That's kind of hard to do.
But I must say the ideas of the books Things is awesome and makes total sense.
Also they something I want to tell you It's kind of funny, Because Every time I read this story I'm listening to some kind of scary Video in the background. Like the first five chapters I was watching Lotus prince Play this Interesting little PC game Call Whiteday a labyrinth named school it Kind of a long Name But a fun game.
When I got to the six chapter,
I've Just finished watching John Carpenter's The Thing So I was Listening to Special Features It made me laugh When Jack was reading the Story But I has This helpless feeling Throughout the entire chapter And thinking about that movie only made it Worse.
I've rambled on long enough So let me just say one last thing, Me and Wheeljack Do the exact same, thing When my sister was reading books to me before going to bed.
"Sigh" And you know what I said after Every chapter? Just one More please It's not that late.
UTHEMAN
It's criminal how little Reviews this story has, Honestly people don't know a Good story when they see.
It has a wonderful Narrative, The way You written the character is Simply amazing, It feels like you are ready letting them have a chance to grow.
And now you're bringing new Idea To the pot but it doesn't Feel Out of place,
That's kind of hard to do.
But I must say the ideas of the books Things is awesome and makes total sense.
Also they something I want to tell you It's kind of funny, Because Every time I read this story I'm listening to some kind of scary Video in the background. Like the first five chapters I was watching Lotus prince Play this Interesting little PC game Call Whiteday a labyrinth named school it Kind of a long Name But a fun game.
When I got to the six chapter,
I've Just finished watching John Carpenter's The Thing So I was Listening to Special Features It made me laugh When Jack was reading the Story But I has This helpless feeling Throughout the entire chapter And thinking about that movie only made it Worse.
I've rambled on long enough So let me just say one last thing, Me and Wheeljack Do the exact same, thing When my sister was reading books to me before going to bed.
"Sigh" And you know what I said after Every chapter? Just one More please It's not that late.
UTHEMAN
4/30/2013 c1 Solsabre
Oh, thank you, thank you! You capture Arcee's fierce spirit perfectly! I really adore the banter between her and Wheeljack. Can't wait for more!
Oh, thank you, thank you! You capture Arcee's fierce spirit perfectly! I really adore the banter between her and Wheeljack. Can't wait for more!
4/5/2013 c5 UTHEMAN
What a great, great Fic, Please keep it up!
What a great, great Fic, Please keep it up!
3/15/2013 c3 xXRetrobotXx
The pairing sounds... Interesting, but in a good way. Love the plotline so far!
The pairing sounds... Interesting, but in a good way. Love the plotline so far!