for Botsuraku5/31/2022 c4 Helios7406
That's it? They leave you to die to save themselves and all you give them in return is a little attitude? How is this a darker version of Naruto? He just accepted what they did to him with no consequences.
That's it? They leave you to die to save themselves and all you give them in return is a little attitude? How is this a darker version of Naruto? He just accepted what they did to him with no consequences.
8/11/2021 c6 ectio
This was the fic that made me see your profile in hopes of more like this. What I found, was a 1.1M word FanFiction, still ongoing. While I hope you can update this (never gonna happen but I’ll still ask lol), I want to thank you for writing a fic of such length and quality. Thank you
This was the fic that made me see your profile in hopes of more like this. What I found, was a 1.1M word FanFiction, still ongoing. While I hope you can update this (never gonna happen but I’ll still ask lol), I want to thank you for writing a fic of such length and quality. Thank you
6/1/2020 c6 Samthman
This was a good story but it no longer lives
(Wait if he isn’t naruto anymore then the promises he made as him are no longer valid)
This was a good story but it no longer lives
(Wait if he isn’t naruto anymore then the promises he made as him are no longer valid)
10/3/2019 c6 
18Psudocode Samurai
looking forward to more. I always like the idea of cyber/puppet kinda Naruto, but they are rare these days
the mentality, the changes and fighting style are all a nice change, want to see the general part of it _
18Psudocode Samurailooking forward to more. I always like the idea of cyber/puppet kinda Naruto, but they are rare these days
the mentality, the changes and fighting style are all a nice change, want to see the general part of it _
9/22/2019 c6 Guest 8
Have Botsuraku left Sasuke to die like they did him. Sakura offer herself to be Botsuraku‘s slave to being killed. Naruto told Sakura about the truth of the bench.
Have Botsuraku left Sasuke to die like they did him. Sakura offer herself to be Botsuraku‘s slave to being killed. Naruto told Sakura about the truth of the bench.
12/26/2018 c1 Guest
This is the most intense Naruto-as-General-Grievous fanfic ever!
This is the most intense Naruto-as-General-Grievous fanfic ever!
1/9/2018 c6 Sammie1989
Hope you will continue with writing this story, I think it is very well written and so far has a good plot...keep up the good work
Hope you will continue with writing this story, I think it is very well written and so far has a good plot...keep up the good work
12/7/2017 c6 14Gerald Apollyon
Definitely one of my favorites and my number one where Naruto takes up the legacy of a very well respected/feared Star Wars character. Really wish you would continue, badly want to see how it ends.
14Gerald ApollyonDefinitely one of my favorites and my number one where Naruto takes up the legacy of a very well respected/feared Star Wars character. Really wish you would continue, badly want to see how it ends.
1/19/2017 c6 Nobody
A good start shame you never did anything futher with this.
A good start shame you never did anything futher with this.
3/18/2016 c6 3bcsclaymore
can't wait to see tsunade and jiraiya's reaction to the rest of the team abandoning naruto and what it caused him to turn into.
3bcsclaymorecan't wait to see tsunade and jiraiya's reaction to the rest of the team abandoning naruto and what it caused him to turn into.
1/17/2016 c6 SPark681
Damn nice story so far though Tsunade not gonna be happy and knowing Danzo he'll try and turn this event to his favor somehow anyways keep up the great work!
Damn nice story so far though Tsunade not gonna be happy and knowing Danzo he'll try and turn this event to his favor somehow anyways keep up the great work!
7/6/2015 c6 Dragon de la Muerte
I really like the concept and how Naruto has changed. It doesn't seem forced or anything like that. I do wonder about Sakura though. Is Naruto going to hate Sakura? She was unconcious when the team left him behind so she really doesn't deserve blame for that. But, she was too weak to handle her opponent so I could see Naruto having harsh words with her and then associating with her once she has become stronger or Naruto helping her become stronger so that she is loyal to him. Overall I really enjoyed it
I really like the concept and how Naruto has changed. It doesn't seem forced or anything like that. I do wonder about Sakura though. Is Naruto going to hate Sakura? She was unconcious when the team left him behind so she really doesn't deserve blame for that. But, she was too weak to handle her opponent so I could see Naruto having harsh words with her and then associating with her once she has become stronger or Naruto helping her become stronger so that she is loyal to him. Overall I really enjoyed it