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5/26/2013 c1 19iAMwhatIamK
Very nice job, my dear. The historical AU didn't always come through, but the story was fantastically written. You captured Axel and Larxene's personalities superbly and did well at writing the battle sequence (something that is very difficult to do...and I speak from experience of one that has yet to master it). So...are you for Larxene and Axel as a couple? I'd love to have your input on my own Savage Nymph story, but be warned, parts of it are dark and disturbing.
Anyway, great job my dear.
3/10/2013 c1 57Amulet Misty
Larxene ia so bad-ass as a princess (though she is bad ass anyway). I love the way she just had to electrocute him in the end to win. Lesson for Axel, don't touch Larxene while fighting.

I can't see any grammatical/spelling mistakes, so no criticisms here.

You're really good at making interesting fight scenes. Can't wait for more!

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