
1/2/2015 c1
287ThomE.Gemcity-06
Poor Fili and Kili. As I was reading this, and was seeing how angry and frustrated that Bilbo was getting at Fili's denial (so was I) I was kinda waiting and hoping that Bilbo would march out of the house and confront Thorin about his abuse towards Fili.

Poor Fili and Kili. As I was reading this, and was seeing how angry and frustrated that Bilbo was getting at Fili's denial (so was I) I was kinda waiting and hoping that Bilbo would march out of the house and confront Thorin about his abuse towards Fili.
1/4/2014 c1
1StellaCartoonlover
How old is he then? Because that grade-system confuses me to no end...

How old is he then? Because that grade-system confuses me to no end...
4/26/2013 c1
6DevyChan
I really like the idea you have here i wish you would continue it. Being a fan of writing abuse as well i like the emotion you put behind it and you made the story very visual but not overly so which i like. great job and hope to read more by you 3

I really like the idea you have here i wish you would continue it. Being a fan of writing abuse as well i like the emotion you put behind it and you made the story very visual but not overly so which i like. great job and hope to read more by you 3
4/13/2013 c1
6PeopleAreSoPettyAndTiny-Thor
I love it! It's written really well and the idea is brilliant and HOLY FUCK KILI IS SO CUTE! I have to say I'd love for there to be a sequel. Poor Fili though... great work and it's sooooooooooooooo cuuuutttteeeeee (well obviously appart from the fact that Thorin's abusive -that aint cute- bad Thorin!) ! :D

I love it! It's written really well and the idea is brilliant and HOLY FUCK KILI IS SO CUTE! I have to say I'd love for there to be a sequel. Poor Fili though... great work and it's sooooooooooooooo cuuuutttteeeeee (well obviously appart from the fact that Thorin's abusive -that aint cute- bad Thorin!) ! :D
3/11/2013 c1
8x beautifully broken x
It's good but I am a little confused about fili and kili are they brothers or son and dad it was a little confusing and how is bilbo and bofur together
Your writing is very good though
Love kili

It's good but I am a little confused about fili and kili are they brothers or son and dad it was a little confusing and how is bilbo and bofur together
Your writing is very good though
Love kili