3/9/2019 c1 173chloemcg
Ooooh, great short story! I love the idea of the marmosets fighting the birds again and I am kind of wishing that this sort of plot line was in the second movie because that (in my opinion) would have made it better. You really should write more stories because your are totally cool.

I really appreciate that you care, though, and thank you for the review. :)

Well the short update is that my tummy is doing much better (as I mentioned in my rather recent review of the third chapter for “New life to old life”) but it’s always going to suck unfortunately. I still get stomach aches but I just need to be very careful. It’s getting really close to my birthday, which I am getting super excited about, and that’s basically it.

Sorry if that’s not very interesting but I want to thank you for your support.

You are totally cool, Rapper!

I do hope you write some more stories.

6/20/2014 c1 3gobulldog91
(drive by and see bird tie up ) chevy suburban NYPD : r u guys alright

3/19/2013 c1 7century99
Hahahaha man this is a classic awsome job man I mean no offense when I say this story is short but humoris great job I liked it

3/17/2013 c1 2Francisco the Golden Macaw
Lol XD. Now what? Well it seems blu messed up big time. How are they getting out of this one?