for Harry Potter and the Four Horsemen9/2/2018 c15 
7Souen112
Really enjoyed the idea behind this as well as the story right until the last chapter where you shoved the forgiveness for all trope down my throat.
7Souen112Really enjoyed the idea behind this as well as the story right until the last chapter where you shoved the forgiveness for all trope down my throat.
8/22/2018 c15 3Rabid33
I liked the story and the concept there are so few stories that deal with Harry and friends being the 4 riders and even fewer that are completed... I just think you could have done more with this, the war with Voldemort, Jason,James, and Dumbledore all got away with what they did... he didn’t have to kill them but punishment could have been worse... These are just my opinions and thank you for sharing you’re story
3Rabid33I liked the story and the concept there are so few stories that deal with Harry and friends being the 4 riders and even fewer that are completed... I just think you could have done more with this, the war with Voldemort, Jason,James, and Dumbledore all got away with what they did... he didn’t have to kill them but punishment could have been worse... These are just my opinions and thank you for sharing you’re story
6/11/2018 c15 stormhazel
What a shit ending to a good story. Sorry but James literally enslaved his wife and abandoned his child- and you made him godfather? Tf?
What a shit ending to a good story. Sorry but James literally enslaved his wife and abandoned his child- and you made him godfather? Tf?
5/16/2018 c15 fanreader18
...it was a good story up til the last chapter. I find it hard to believe that James and Jason get forgiven so easily for what they did.
...it was a good story up til the last chapter. I find it hard to believe that James and Jason get forgiven so easily for what they did.
5/15/2018 c1 fanreader18
question. Why did Hermione get the role she did and how is it supposed to make sense?
question. Why did Hermione get the role she did and how is it supposed to make sense?
4/29/2018 c15 62Stormshadow13
This was an amazing story. You did a wonderful job. I love the idea and you did a wonderful job of describing everything. I could see it in my mind as I read it. Great job. Thank you so much for a good story.
62Stormshadow13This was an amazing story. You did a wonderful job. I love the idea and you did a wonderful job of describing everything. I could see it in my mind as I read it. Great job. Thank you so much for a good story.
4/13/2018 c15 Komorebi
It was well written. I was almost going to add this to my list of favs if it wasn’t for the last chapter. I’m sorry I know this is your story and you can write it however you want to, but I really couldn’t accept that James got away with what he did to Harry and Lily. Even the First had to pay the price but not James, I mean really he just got away with no punishment and gets his friends and family back; it just pissed me off. And Jason I’m sorry but I don’t believe that he was pretending the whole time. I was waiting for James and Jason to reap their rewards and the last chapter spoiled the whole story for me. Thank you
It was well written. I was almost going to add this to my list of favs if it wasn’t for the last chapter. I’m sorry I know this is your story and you can write it however you want to, but I really couldn’t accept that James got away with what he did to Harry and Lily. Even the First had to pay the price but not James, I mean really he just got away with no punishment and gets his friends and family back; it just pissed me off. And Jason I’m sorry but I don’t believe that he was pretending the whole time. I was waiting for James and Jason to reap their rewards and the last chapter spoiled the whole story for me. Thank you
4/9/2018 c15 Nocse
I can't say I loved the story, sorry, as there were some things didn't agree with, like James getting away with his crimes so easily. What he did to Lily was despicable and he deserved whatever punishment Dante would have given him. I liked the concept of this story, the horsemen and Harry being Lord Death, etc. but I think you wasted an opportunity to make a masterpiece. It could've been longer, better, but it's over now, nothing I say will change that. Thank you for writing this, I had fun reading.
Nox
I can't say I loved the story, sorry, as there were some things didn't agree with, like James getting away with his crimes so easily. What he did to Lily was despicable and he deserved whatever punishment Dante would have given him. I liked the concept of this story, the horsemen and Harry being Lord Death, etc. but I think you wasted an opportunity to make a masterpiece. It could've been longer, better, but it's over now, nothing I say will change that. Thank you for writing this, I had fun reading.
Nox
2/28/2018 c15 1Volksbrot
Interesting story, I'll give you that. There were some things I didn't agree with and some things I'd have liked to happen differently, but it's your story and not mine. The thing I liked least about your story was probably the relationships, I think that you could have simply written more about them, especially in the ending scene.
Then again, it's your story and it was a good one, if a little short.
Volksbrot
1VolksbrotInteresting story, I'll give you that. There were some things I didn't agree with and some things I'd have liked to happen differently, but it's your story and not mine. The thing I liked least about your story was probably the relationships, I think that you could have simply written more about them, especially in the ending scene.
Then again, it's your story and it was a good one, if a little short.
Volksbrot
1/20/2018 c15 Guest
Love this story though towards the end it seems too quick. I know you started a rewrite of this but then took it down. Would you possibly come back to doing that again?
Love this story though towards the end it seems too quick. I know you started a rewrite of this but then took it down. Would you possibly come back to doing that again?