
2/15/2024 c5
1Gamtur Shak Nola
Scorpio is a cool middle name, but going by astronomical names, I think Polaris (The pole star, the evil star) would be less edge-lord sounding, but still work with the theme :P

Scorpio is a cool middle name, but going by astronomical names, I think Polaris (The pole star, the evil star) would be less edge-lord sounding, but still work with the theme :P
2/6/2024 c16 Sleepyhawk502
Too bad negative comments were made. I thought this story was Great! Thanks for sharing!
For negative people who bash others writing! Go write your own you big chicken!
Too bad negative comments were made. I thought this story was Great! Thanks for sharing!
For negative people who bash others writing! Go write your own you big chicken!
2/6/2024 c16
2dragonasp
Just finished reading this story. I must say I greatly enjoyed it. Reading the final Author's note, I am very sorry to hear you will no longer be writing stories here, though I certainly understand the reasoning in regards to peoples' hate and cruelty. As with any truly creative person, writer or something else, your contributions will be missed, with the world just that little bit less colorful for the lack. God Bless.

Just finished reading this story. I must say I greatly enjoyed it. Reading the final Author's note, I am very sorry to hear you will no longer be writing stories here, though I certainly understand the reasoning in regards to peoples' hate and cruelty. As with any truly creative person, writer or something else, your contributions will be missed, with the world just that little bit less colorful for the lack. God Bless.
2/3/2024 c1 Guest
God this is stupid. Put WBWL in the summary.
God this is stupid. Put WBWL in the summary.
1/25/2024 c15 HoneyBear84
Hi im a bit confused still Harry/Dante never explained how he and jason are not twins even though they were born a week apart? Plus James had some cheak sort of calling Lily a cheat then actually cheating on Lily and going as far as having another child with the other woman lol, btw he never explained why he suddenly seemed to hate hate and abandoned him or why he abused raped and controlled Lily like that. At least we know what happened with Jason. And was Dumbles trying to create another dark lord by getting Harry sent to the same orphanage as Voldemort? Apart from that Love it
Hi im a bit confused still Harry/Dante never explained how he and jason are not twins even though they were born a week apart? Plus James had some cheak sort of calling Lily a cheat then actually cheating on Lily and going as far as having another child with the other woman lol, btw he never explained why he suddenly seemed to hate hate and abandoned him or why he abused raped and controlled Lily like that. At least we know what happened with Jason. And was Dumbles trying to create another dark lord by getting Harry sent to the same orphanage as Voldemort? Apart from that Love it
12/21/2023 c16 burnnotice
that sucks. another author bows out by succumbing to peer pressure about their writing.
that sucks. another author bows out by succumbing to peer pressure about their writing.
12/16/2023 c15 Kerrion
Why is lilly blaming James? She agreed with Albus about Harry having to be sent away. She was the one thst gave him the sleeping draught to knock him out so James could take him. You just needed a reason to make James the bad guy and snape the good guy. Lilly is to blame for what happened as much as James. The first chapter was her agreeing with albus about getting rid of Harry to protect
Why is lilly blaming James? She agreed with Albus about Harry having to be sent away. She was the one thst gave him the sleeping draught to knock him out so James could take him. You just needed a reason to make James the bad guy and snape the good guy. Lilly is to blame for what happened as much as James. The first chapter was her agreeing with albus about getting rid of Harry to protect