for The Djinn and the Obsidian Egg4/1/2013 c1 
3Robin555
So crazy and weird. You just had a field day with this one. But that is what crack is all about. Break the boundaries, do something crazy. Get the juices going. And you did-great!
3Robin555So crazy and weird. You just had a field day with this one. But that is what crack is all about. Break the boundaries, do something crazy. Get the juices going. And you did-great!
3/30/2013 c1 Robin555
Funny crazy crack just as it should be! A wild ride to say the least! Great fun and thanks for writing.
Funny crazy crack just as it should be! A wild ride to say the least! Great fun and thanks for writing.
3/16/2013 c1 28Wynja
*lol* oh dear god... I really have no IDEA how this will fare in the Easter competition... either you'll get all the votes or none of them.. .*lol* (and : Alice in Wonderland, of course) ;)
I wasn't too disturbed by the scat and the topping, simply because it was all so crazy and random already so it didn't feel real, and, of course, it wasn't... you DID manage to put in one of my pet peeves, though: Slade stuttering... THAT was harder to read than Slade bottoming... ;) I have another comment as well, but I'm gonna write it on facebook, it's really too personal for a review...
28Wynja*lol* oh dear god... I really have no IDEA how this will fare in the Easter competition... either you'll get all the votes or none of them.. .*lol* (and : Alice in Wonderland, of course) ;)
I wasn't too disturbed by the scat and the topping, simply because it was all so crazy and random already so it didn't feel real, and, of course, it wasn't... you DID manage to put in one of my pet peeves, though: Slade stuttering... THAT was harder to read than Slade bottoming... ;) I have another comment as well, but I'm gonna write it on facebook, it's really too personal for a review...
3/15/2013 c1 Critic from hell
Alice in Wonderland! The twins, the hole...I saw all the clues. Djinn are awesome. I want to read about them now. I didn't know that they were Islamic. That song "Crickets" is super fly. I am a Jason Todd believer myself. I enjoyed the graphic images. It wasn't pointless and idiotic like that poop story we read the other day. You are bold to have Robin top.I thought that your story was clever and well done.
Alice in Wonderland! The twins, the hole...I saw all the clues. Djinn are awesome. I want to read about them now. I didn't know that they were Islamic. That song "Crickets" is super fly. I am a Jason Todd believer myself. I enjoyed the graphic images. It wasn't pointless and idiotic like that poop story we read the other day. You are bold to have Robin top.I thought that your story was clever and well done.
3/15/2013 c1 Baruga
Well then. You seemed to try too hard at some parts, it didn't seem too plausible or in character for Slade, and it also seemed rushed.
Well then. You seemed to try too hard at some parts, it didn't seem too plausible or in character for Slade, and it also seemed rushed.