3/26/2020 c1 kkgye4sgbkljgui
I noticed a few grammar errors but this was really funny. Goku's really dense sometimes but I don't think goten is as dense as his father. cute story though!

4/17/2013 c1 8DarkForestWolf
That was such a cute story! Haha I loved it! Goten and Goku make the cutest father son moments. Their just so darn cute together! Wouldn't you agree?! Anyway's, keep up the fantastic work! :D

3/17/2013 c1 18Reun
Writing a super funny short story like this... are you high?

Seriously, I couldn't resist laughing reading this. Goten was so random and clueless to the point of being hilarious. And who wouldn't love his and Goku's goofiness at the end?

Thanks for the good read, and I hope you have a good day. And you know? I once thought cockroaches gave birth instead of laying eggs.

3/17/2013 c1 50Death101- Fox Version
This was cute. Although I have a hard time seeing someone asking a person if they are high if they know the other person isn't too bright but it works well with the joke. Nicely done.
-D101

3/16/2013 c1 Gohan123
Haha this is freaking hilarious! I especially like the Trunks one! :)

3/16/2013 c1 fkp5
Very funny! Of course Goten would ask Goku what 'Are you high?' means.