for Number 83/26/2015 c2 lkedmslckmdex
I thought angel was kind of occ, i was fine with it because I don't like angels character anyway. I thought you did well enough with ender, just make sure to keep him as a character who hates fighting and is kind of haunted, I still get orson scott card is hard to imitate though
I thought angel was kind of occ, i was fine with it because I don't like angels character anyway. I thought you did well enough with ender, just make sure to keep him as a character who hates fighting and is kind of haunted, I still get orson scott card is hard to imitate though
5/17/2014 c1 Potato
This looks really cool. Please continue! :)
This looks really cool. Please continue! :)
7/25/2013 c1 Rea
Love it! Can't wait for your next update!
Love it! Can't wait for your next update!
5/22/2013 c1 tyler
this is one of the best things i have ever seen i hope it continues
this is one of the best things i have ever seen i hope it continues
4/13/2013 c1 
1nyanzo-picklebum
Ender is smarter than making up stuff in his mind...I hope he's not gonna turn out a wimp in your fanfic.;):)
1nyanzo-picklebumEnder is smarter than making up stuff in his mind...I hope he's not gonna turn out a wimp in your fanfic.;):)
3/17/2013 c1 7Schizoid7Loner
I've never actually read Maximum Ride (I could never find the first book, and I prefer to start a series chronologically), bt I think this chapter was well written. Twelve? This is pretty good then.
I like the fact that you write Ender as silent but not quite shy. It's a good balance.
7Schizoid7LonerI've never actually read Maximum Ride (I could never find the first book, and I prefer to start a series chronologically), bt I think this chapter was well written. Twelve? This is pretty good then.
I like the fact that you write Ender as silent but not quite shy. It's a good balance.