for Elevator Music3/21/2013 c1 
29Bye11
I knew watching the episode that she wouldn't go in but I hoped till the last second that she would just let herself go. This kind of scenario seems totally plausible and it's so well-written. You did make me curious as to where the story will go from here, so I would love if you wrote more.
29Bye11I knew watching the episode that she wouldn't go in but I hoped till the last second that she would just let herself go. This kind of scenario seems totally plausible and it's so well-written. You did make me curious as to where the story will go from here, so I would love if you wrote more.
3/20/2013 c1 guategal
Ahhh...such sensations...your picture story...Alicia's authentic self released in a brief moment...quite a nice job! Thanks
Ahhh...such sensations...your picture story...Alicia's authentic self released in a brief moment...quite a nice job! Thanks
3/19/2013 c1 24Nessakitty821
A dig at Peter and there's Will to catch her... I liked it, you should write more in the future.
Thanks for sharing.
24Nessakitty821A dig at Peter and there's Will to catch her... I liked it, you should write more in the future.
Thanks for sharing.
3/19/2013 c1 Guest
Lovely. Love those last few lines. Just perfect. I really miss these two :(
Lovely. Love those last few lines. Just perfect. I really miss these two :(
3/18/2013 c1 Guest
OH MY GOD YOU'RE AWESOME
OH MY GOD YOU'RE AWESOME
3/18/2013 c1 3nolongeractive523
I love it! I think it's something you can continue and you should if you want to. I would love to read more. :-)
3nolongeractive523I love it! I think it's something you can continue and you should if you want to. I would love to read more. :-)
3/18/2013 c1 julia
This is great!
Keep on the good work!
This is great!
Keep on the good work!
3/18/2013 c1 tamires
Continue plesa!
It‘s going to be M-rated?
Continue plesa!
It‘s going to be M-rated?
3/18/2013 c1 30tiva forever2009-2010
ohh yeah i so totally agree with you! you know things build up and sooner or later they will explode!
30tiva forever2009-2010ohh yeah i so totally agree with you! you know things build up and sooner or later they will explode!
3/18/2013 c1 Guest
Yes ! This is so good and also unexpected in her actions - I love the stepping backwards and the silence. Write more !
Yes ! This is so good and also unexpected in her actions - I love the stepping backwards and the silence. Write more !
3/18/2013 c1 Emilie
So hot! Love it! You should write more!
So hot! Love it! You should write more!