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4/4/2013 c1 FranticHamster
fun to read kinda random but it was interesting.
3/25/2013 c1 Professor
An interesting change of pace from your other work. I'm impressed with the flow of the combat scenes. I wouldn't say that this "sucks," as you put it, but there really isn't any opposition to provide any dramatic tension for a long story, so it is best that this stays as a one-shot.

Typos I noticed:
could fly for long periods without botheration
another remote but much larger than a mere outpost.
runways set upon them in a crossed manner.
"Pilots I'd die than face in combat".
3/19/2013 c1 4Melissa45
Well, I for one liked it. I've never seen the gundam series you based it on but I learned enough to understand the basics through your story. And I liked the havoc Harry was causing.
3/18/2013 c1 Gustavius3
this tale is well worth continuing.
3/18/2013 c1 Jostanos
YOU PASS!
FLAWLESS VICTORY! _

You think this story sucks?! I think it's BRILLIANT! _

I admit that it has been a VERY long time since I have watched the Gundam 00 series( or any of the Gundam series for that matter :P), but I believe that you were true to the series even when you added Harry Potter to the mix!

Granted that this was your own spin to it. :)

Harry Potter/ A. Black is slowly but surely taking Earth and Space back from the EFF and the TITANS.

What may happen next?

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