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5/22/2023 c1 8NitwitOddmentBlubberTweak
Aww, so sad. Loved it!
10/13/2014 c1 66Donna Vito Frutti
I love Remus! Great fic ;))
6/28/2014 c1 10Zarcasm
Wow
10/4/2013 c1 614yellow 14
Short, but very nicely sharp. Keep writing
8/6/2013 c1 18Invisiblegirl3
I think you captured the situation and emotions just right. Poor Remus.
8/4/2013 c1 38loveislouder94
Remus is my favourite marauder, actually, and I liked this. The way Remus referred to James and Sirius as brothers, and Lily as a sister was a good way of showing how much they meant to him. Well done!
6/28/2013 c1 5Dreams of Disaster
Angsty. Really angsty.
I especially like your portrayal of Remus waiting in the cell for himself to change, all alone. It adds even more loneliness into the story. Also, I like your last line...
"I'm a monster a nobody and we never get an easy life."
It was so sad!
Please write another chapter, like one where he gets a little love back, from Tonks, or someone OOC.
*runs off somewhere to cry*
Dreams of Disaster :'(

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