for The Silent Screaming in Your Wake4/21/2020 c19 Liz
your are in collage now what are you studying may I ask, I don't mean to pry just wondering. also please say safe wale this horrible vires is going around the world.
your are in collage now what are you studying may I ask, I don't mean to pry just wondering. also please say safe wale this horrible vires is going around the world.
1/22/2018 c7 shinyleopard
I felt like crying when I read this chapter. If this story had stopped here, then Edward had the saddest life-story I've ever read. He's always determined, always striving for his goal, being the older brother Alphonse needs, doing whatever has to be done to get their body's back, and despite all of this, he can't do it. He's stopped at every turn, and his suffering spreads to those around him, those he only wanted to protect. I really hope Fullmetal's story doesn't end here.
I felt like crying when I read this chapter. If this story had stopped here, then Edward had the saddest life-story I've ever read. He's always determined, always striving for his goal, being the older brother Alphonse needs, doing whatever has to be done to get their body's back, and despite all of this, he can't do it. He's stopped at every turn, and his suffering spreads to those around him, those he only wanted to protect. I really hope Fullmetal's story doesn't end here.
10/18/2015 c18 
23Bubblekins1010
THIS IS INCREDIBLE! Seriously! I would write more to this but it is 2am so all I can say is that this is amazing, incredible, awesome! I love it! Please update soon!
-Amazed,
Bubblekins1010
23Bubblekins1010THIS IS INCREDIBLE! Seriously! I would write more to this but it is 2am so all I can say is that this is amazing, incredible, awesome! I love it! Please update soon!
-Amazed,
Bubblekins1010
10/2/2015 c18 12curligurl0896
Omg... You should really update more.
Not that I don't understand. After all, life gets in the way, and there simply isn't time to update... And then there's the dreaded writer's block.
I started reading the first fic not too long ago. And I just finished reading this one. And, let me tell you, it's really good so far.
Anyway, I really liked how Roy described what Ed would do to the person who dared kidnap Winry. It made him sound so incredibly badass. Like an avenging angel or something.
And I really hope Winry's okay! And that they find her before anything else happens! And that you update soon and resolve this cliffhanger you left!
Maybe this review will help motivate you. I mean, I know reviews motivate me to update.
12curligurl0896Omg... You should really update more.
Not that I don't understand. After all, life gets in the way, and there simply isn't time to update... And then there's the dreaded writer's block.
I started reading the first fic not too long ago. And I just finished reading this one. And, let me tell you, it's really good so far.
Anyway, I really liked how Roy described what Ed would do to the person who dared kidnap Winry. It made him sound so incredibly badass. Like an avenging angel or something.
And I really hope Winry's okay! And that they find her before anything else happens! And that you update soon and resolve this cliffhanger you left!
Maybe this review will help motivate you. I mean, I know reviews motivate me to update.
2/19/2015 c18 21Dragonfire Alchemist
Excellent chapter, as per usual! I'm glad this got updated. Poor Ed... (Though how fun it is to torture the poor kiddo with his own grief plus physical and emotional torment and turmoil)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
21Dragonfire AlchemistExcellent chapter, as per usual! I'm glad this got updated. Poor Ed... (Though how fun it is to torture the poor kiddo with his own grief plus physical and emotional torment and turmoil)
Can't wait for the next chapter!
2/8/2015 c18 1tontonte
congrats! U did writ a lot...
And don't worry! I shall never bring out weapons for slow updates!
Unless u decide to discontinue it.
Then... *pulls out knife* u will continue this...
Anyway... Luv the story!, hope u update soon!
tontonte
1tontontecongrats! U did writ a lot...
And don't worry! I shall never bring out weapons for slow updates!
Unless u decide to discontinue it.
Then... *pulls out knife* u will continue this...
Anyway... Luv the story!, hope u update soon!
tontonte
2/1/2015 c7 Little Missy
And to think I was worried about the term you used earlier. This is not merely psychological torture, thus is just plain cruelty in its finest. Almost as terrible as Shou Tucker. Yes, I did just compare you to him. And no, I'm not worried about what you could do to me. All I want now, [takes a sword off her back] is to see you suffer for doing this! [runs at the author, swinging the sword like a bloodthirsty samurai hellbent on the death of their target] [shouts] Worried about no updating? Don't you mean worried what your readers will do once they've let you chapter sink in? That is probably worse.
And to think I was worried about the term you used earlier. This is not merely psychological torture, thus is just plain cruelty in its finest. Almost as terrible as Shou Tucker. Yes, I did just compare you to him. And no, I'm not worried about what you could do to me. All I want now, [takes a sword off her back] is to see you suffer for doing this! [runs at the author, swinging the sword like a bloodthirsty samurai hellbent on the death of their target] [shouts] Worried about no updating? Don't you mean worried what your readers will do once they've let you chapter sink in? That is probably worse.
2/1/2015 c3 Little Missy
Say, did you mean literal physical torture, or psychological torture? Physiological refers to one's function of their living systems, like the respiratory system and such. Physical is like hand to hand, bullets, basically offence and defence of solid objects. Whereas psychological is in the head, mentally. I honestly don't understand that bit, as you wrote physiological, but the method that seems to have been used is psychological. If you'd reply at some point, I'll be glad. Thanks.
Awesome story, by the way. Really tugs at your heartstrings, doesn't it?
Say, did you mean literal physical torture, or psychological torture? Physiological refers to one's function of their living systems, like the respiratory system and such. Physical is like hand to hand, bullets, basically offence and defence of solid objects. Whereas psychological is in the head, mentally. I honestly don't understand that bit, as you wrote physiological, but the method that seems to have been used is psychological. If you'd reply at some point, I'll be glad. Thanks.
Awesome story, by the way. Really tugs at your heartstrings, doesn't it?
1/30/2015 c18 2Kiri Natsumi-Tetsuya
Well hell's gonna be busy, Ed's got some work to do.
Poor Winry! I just wanna cry for her!
See ya next time!
*Hugs and kisses, then throws cookies behind me as I leave*
2Kiri Natsumi-TetsuyaWell hell's gonna be busy, Ed's got some work to do.
Poor Winry! I just wanna cry for her!
See ya next time!
*Hugs and kisses, then throws cookies behind me as I leave*
1/30/2015 c18 6karmadella1234
postin chapters at school shame on you! you deserve to be covered in neon orange paint and yellow feathers , rolled in snow and tickled til you dislocate your shoulder blades with random flailing. I like the chapter but you should update more. And i can say all that hypocritical school stuff cause im on virtual school 5 minute break with cat preventing my movement,. Love , Karmadella
6karmadella1234postin chapters at school shame on you! you deserve to be covered in neon orange paint and yellow feathers , rolled in snow and tickled til you dislocate your shoulder blades with random flailing. I like the chapter but you should update more. And i can say all that hypocritical school stuff cause im on virtual school 5 minute break with cat preventing my movement,. Love , Karmadella
1/20/2015 c17 199
Hugs. Hugs, all around. We've got murders, Ed dying, alchemical suicides, PTSD, overdosing on drugs and alcohol - everyone needs a hug. Including you. Because of those tests.
Hugs. Hugs, all around. We've got murders, Ed dying, alchemical suicides, PTSD, overdosing on drugs and alcohol - everyone needs a hug. Including you. Because of those tests.
1/20/2015 c16 199
Well then, I say fuck. I give up. And I kinda went away for a while anyways, so...
Well then, I say fuck. I give up. And I kinda went away for a while anyways, so...