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3/28/2013 c2 331983Sarah
Great job! Loved it!
3/21/2013 c2 5S.A.N.e-but-inS.A.N.e
Amazing...I wish that they had done something like this on the show, just to get Pratt off their trail. Great job! Looking forward to more stories from you!
3/21/2013 c2 Guest
this is cool
3/20/2013 c2 velveteen habit
Loved it. Nice job!
3/20/2013 c2 Leonore09
Very plotted and believable. I liked this, please continue. It is a gem to find an actual story with plot and good characterization as you did. My thanks. I dislike so much of the torture Neal stories or make him childlike and not able to do any thing on his own. This is classic Peter saving Neal yet using Neal's plans to resolve the situation.
3/20/2013 c2 80peppe1951
I liked that...it was good...poor Neal in trying to protect Peter ended up needing protection himself. You did an excellent job with the story...

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