for Monday3/21/2013 c2 
5S.A.N.e-but-inS.A.N.e
Amazing...I wish that they had done something like this on the show, just to get Pratt off their trail. Great job! Looking forward to more stories from you!
5S.A.N.e-but-inS.A.N.eAmazing...I wish that they had done something like this on the show, just to get Pratt off their trail. Great job! Looking forward to more stories from you!
3/21/2013 c2 Guest
this is cool
this is cool
3/20/2013 c2 Leonore09
Very plotted and believable. I liked this, please continue. It is a gem to find an actual story with plot and good characterization as you did. My thanks. I dislike so much of the torture Neal stories or make him childlike and not able to do any thing on his own. This is classic Peter saving Neal yet using Neal's plans to resolve the situation.
Very plotted and believable. I liked this, please continue. It is a gem to find an actual story with plot and good characterization as you did. My thanks. I dislike so much of the torture Neal stories or make him childlike and not able to do any thing on his own. This is classic Peter saving Neal yet using Neal's plans to resolve the situation.