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6/13 c10 GenieM
I am enjoying the story alot and hope you finish it!
2/29 c1 dirk187
i love ur stories and i can't wait till you update them
10/12/2019 c4 8SoulNightshade
I actually can see Hedwig training Harry
11/27/2018 c10 3RosettaRoseburn
Even though it's been five years since this story was posted I would like to mention something that annoyed me. In the chapter where Harry goes shopping you say Hermione is there in the shop but later when Harry and Hermione are talking Hermione thinks how she wishes she could be there so she clearly wasn't there.
5/25/2018 c10 bookworm737
I hope you do someday come back to this story, I like what I've read so far :)
5/17/2018 c10 1Calmzone1
It’s really interesting. It does wander back and forth a bit, and seems to go in circles sometimes, but all in all, it’s a good story. I feel for the Twins who love their family but see Harry as a little bro. Some things were left dangling. Ginny sitting writing something never really went anywhere. Percy’s actions are a bit all over the place. And the bad Weasley actions seem to pop up all over the place so you can’t tell if it is hindsight or is just kind of thrown in as an afterthought. Hestia popped up in the chapter out of nowhere. And the map has sort of disappeared as has the Cloak.
The bones of the story are good, as are the main characters’ behaviours. The dialogue and reactions to it, as well as the caring and humour within the story are also well done.
2/21/2018 c10 Nicol
And...
U forgot this story ?
Pity cause it was geting interesting.
Hoping u continue and r not dead...
9/28/2017 c10 Bronze
Damn! Wish it was sooner rather then later but I ain't the one writing this am I? For me it's been almost four years since the last update. But when the ol' muse goes out to lunch and forgets where you live, it's rather hard to hard to continue or even rewrite. So good luck with getting back with this and keep on writing.
9/26/2017 c6 Bronze
Hey! Tommy-boy! Chestnuts roasting over an open fire. Remind you of anything? How about this then," Turn me over. I'm done on this side. "? Stick a fork in me, I'm done!?
9/26/2017 c4 Bronze
When the ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder says do something about the two houses animosity towards each other he really means find a way to allow Slytherin House to continue as it is. He allows Snape to be the poorest teacher he can be in the entire school. But all that is about to changer and not for the better. It's looking like Albie may be taking a long vacation in the sunny warm envirornment of Azkaban. Hope he remembers his suntan lotion.
9/26/2017 c1 Bronze
This does not bode well fro the Dumb-as-a-Door headbastard's plans. The ol' brainless bearded wonder blunder obviously doesn't care if Harry lives or dies just as long as he takes out Riddle before he dies. How else do you explain his placing Harry in an abusive home and never checking up on him? Ya, I know all about Mrs. Figg. However, does she have any access to the goings on within the house? NO! And from the condition of Harry's clothes and his physical condition, he is not well care for. But NONE OF THE TEACHERS NOTICE IT! How is it that Harry's been to the hospital wing at least once a year for the past two yet Poppy hasn't seemed to notice how small he is for his age nor how under weight he is. Sher scans him before treatment but never notices these things. Either she no longer good enough to be a Medinurse or something else is going on. In my opinion, Harry should get the hell out of that death trap of a school and even faster out of the country! Let Dumbles-the-Bumbles clean up his own mess when it comes to Riddle. He's already wasted twelve years sitting on his old bony ass instead of hunting down and destroying Riddle's Horcruxes.
8/21/2017 c9 WhiteEagle1985
A great story so far here! I look forward to reading more!
7/4/2017 c10 Gidget1889
I honestly think that if you took your story and cut it up into each scene then reorganized them to where you aren't jumping back and forth from scene to scene (or rather going from one idea to another and then adding another bit of the first idea once time has already passed and therefore the continuation of the idea is now out of sequence) then the story would flow better and not feel like it is so mixed up. I like the ideas you have for the story it is just choppy and needs to have each idea brought together and developed fully so the timelline of the story moves forward rather than jumping back and forth.
9/24/2015 c4 Fick Chick
Why didn't Snape die with the other DEs?
8/25/2015 c7 tammin
Ok; the plot and timeline jumped around too much in this chapter. For an example, we have Hermione chewing out the Gryffindor Guidditch team for going behind the teacher's back about the love potion Molly was using on Harry, to talking about the Quidditch World Cup and Molly plotting to use Harry as a shoehorn until Polite Pureblood Society (whether he wants to or not). This is not the first time I have observed this in this story. Otherwise, the story is engaging.
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