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43BenRG
Jack really needs to petition to have the Surprise renamed the Troublemaker, because that seems to be firmly the nature of his junior officers right now!
43BenRGJack really needs to petition to have the Surprise renamed the Troublemaker, because that seems to be firmly the nature of his junior officers right now!
1/5/2016 c18 5SelarahMorgan
I absolutely loved this story and read all of it in the last couple of hours. It is absolutely amazing for being your first story. I really wish you had written a sequel and I'm still wondering if it is a possibility that you might consider writing one? Anyway I loved it and wouldn't be opposed to more should you feel inclined to oblige me. ;)
5SelarahMorganI absolutely loved this story and read all of it in the last couple of hours. It is absolutely amazing for being your first story. I really wish you had written a sequel and I'm still wondering if it is a possibility that you might consider writing one? Anyway I loved it and wouldn't be opposed to more should you feel inclined to oblige me. ;)
5/8/2015 c18 54Knowing Grace
This story is FABULOUS! I love it so much! I felt as though I was on the ship alongside Violet, Jack, Stephen and the others. Such a wonderful tale! I am sure that I will read it again and again in the future...perhaps even tomorrow! :D
54Knowing GraceThis story is FABULOUS! I love it so much! I felt as though I was on the ship alongside Violet, Jack, Stephen and the others. Such a wonderful tale! I am sure that I will read it again and again in the future...perhaps even tomorrow! :D
4/5/2015 c9 FieryRedSunrise
This is such an awesome story. I especially love the curtsying bit. That was hilarious!
This is such an awesome story. I especially love the curtsying bit. That was hilarious!
2/23/2014 c18 4Eris'-twin-sister
Thank you so much, it was fantastic. Please write more stories, you're a wonderful writer.
4Eris'-twin-sisterThank you so much, it was fantastic. Please write more stories, you're a wonderful writer.
2/21/2014 c18 8Ranger of Laketown
Awwww, no! It's over! :(
Haha, I loved the ending. I loved this whole story! It was great, a very impressive first fanfic!
One thing I will point out, though. Whenever you write the name of a ship, the ship's name should be italicized. Just thought I'd point that out, if you go on to write a nautical adventure novel or something (like I think you should.) :D
Wonderful story! I'm excited for more from you!
Here's an idea: YOU COULD DO A SEQUEL. *nudgenidgewinkwink* ;)
8Ranger of LaketownAwwww, no! It's over! :(
Haha, I loved the ending. I loved this whole story! It was great, a very impressive first fanfic!
One thing I will point out, though. Whenever you write the name of a ship, the ship's name should be italicized. Just thought I'd point that out, if you go on to write a nautical adventure novel or something (like I think you should.) :D
Wonderful story! I'm excited for more from you!
Here's an idea: YOU COULD DO A SEQUEL. *nudgenidgewinkwink* ;)
2/19/2014 c17 Marshall Fluff
I actually can't wait for the next update! I love this story so much!
I actually can't wait for the next update! I love this story so much!
2/21/2014 c18 1dormienticaputdraconis
Wow! I loved the ending :) Aw, it feels like I'm actually seeing all those old friends again on the Surprise :)
1dormienticaputdraconisWow! I loved the ending :) Aw, it feels like I'm actually seeing all those old friends again on the Surprise :)
2/20/2014 c17 dormienticaputdraconis
Arrrgghh! I'm sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next update!
Arrrgghh! I'm sitting on pins and needles waiting for the next update!
2/20/2014 c17 8Ranger of Laketown
These last few chapters have been great! I love Violet's interaction with the sailors. She doesn't let them push her around and I like that about her. :)
8Ranger of LaketownThese last few chapters have been great! I love Violet's interaction with the sailors. She doesn't let them push her around and I like that about her. :)
2/17/2014 c16 6Astaldowen
Once again, nice job! I think you've broken the record for world's fastest update there! ;) I liked Jack and Stephen here: they were very true to character. Update soon please!
6AstaldowenOnce again, nice job! I think you've broken the record for world's fastest update there! ;) I liked Jack and Stephen here: they were very true to character. Update soon please!
2/17/2014 c16 1dormienticaputdraconis
Awww, I loved it! All of it! You've done really well with the transition between Violet's... genders? :P I like how they aren't suddenly treating her like glass (except the Captain, but he's the Captain... so... haha!) but they are decidedly uncomfortable and don't exactly know what to do :) Dying to see what happens next!
1dormienticaputdraconisAwww, I loved it! All of it! You've done really well with the transition between Violet's... genders? :P I like how they aren't suddenly treating her like glass (except the Captain, but he's the Captain... so... haha!) but they are decidedly uncomfortable and don't exactly know what to do :) Dying to see what happens next!