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4/18/2014 c2 19Meteor Gin
i don't know about the rest but the way you use the dolls is clever, although I think you could use something with more variety then ziggy, more over ditching lou and setting Liddell up with that wimpy brat is kind of... not to mention she's way ooc... also I'm seeing the name Dorothy but... I'm not seeing anything that sounds remotely like Dorothy at all... the way you speak of the eld witch even though she's anne is also weird... is this not based on the second ending? if so shouldn't her aditude be different if she remembers the dream, since the first ending is the nightmare ending..? so, all in all, cool idea for the dolls, over all, weird story...

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