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4/13/2019 c15 Chrissie91
I love this story! Please update the next chapter 3
6/30/2018 c15 Megan
Please update this story! I really love it!
2/20/2018 c15 2Weasleytwins07
I love this story. I know it has been a while, but hope you choose to continue it!
12/5/2017 c15 38Snaperipper
Please continue this story. I am really enjoying it.
2/11/2017 c15 Hoodie02
Update please
11/2/2015 c15 Sampdoria
I really like this story so far, but please let Hermione keep her baby, it will ruin the whole story for me if you take the baby away.
7/17/2015 c15 8mischiefpuff
Personally I think having Charlie or Bill as a god parent would be better. Obviously Harry as well but that's why my personally taste.
7/17/2015 c12 mischiefpuff
I don't care for the big paragraphs. It's a major set back
7/16/2015 c1 mischiefpuff
The way Charlie, Bill and the twins are is how I truly see them.
5/15/2014 c15 Guest
This is such a cute story and I'll be absolutely devastated if you don't continue.
3/25/2014 c2 Guest
why cant he be more "manly"? he is too sweet.
3/13/2014 c15 3musicalradiance
I have really enjoyed reading this, it lives up to my mantra of "don't judge a fic by the ship" which I tell myself before going into a story with a pairing I don't normally/never read.
This said I'd like to offer a few pointers:
-For easier reading it would be helpful if you could split up the longer paragraphs, particularly with the recent inability to highlight portions here on FFN to better keep your place. Length isn't normally a problem, but when a paragraph takes up half my screen it is a small deterrent to the story as a whole.
-I'm not saying you need to acquire a beta reader, but if you would go through and proofread your own work I'm sure it would be appreciated. You tend to drop quotes, post fragments with very little direction to what the partial sentence was attempting to say. Also you tend to switch verb tense midway through paragraphs, even a single sentence.
Bringing up a point you mentioned in your AN of chapter 10 ("So if you can't look past the errors...I guess my stories won't be for you"), looking past errors and having the errors seriously detract from the story are extremely different things. Even with you writing for enjoyment you should be willing to take the time to go back through your stories before posting a new chapter and proofread them a bit. I myself write for enjoyment, but I want to seriously say that if you don't take the time to do that, you may lose more of your readership- which you have admitted helps to persuade you to write. (Not that that is a bad thing, I'm just trying to be kind and say that).

Don't call this a flame, because if you think this is a flame then I'm sorry to say you don't know what a flame actually is. This is constructive criticism.

I hope you take my words well,
2/4/2014 c15 French inconnu
I like your story very much; you alternate up and down realistic in their live. I like also since Fred is alive the family take time to be together again and I really like the relationship you give between the Weasley brothers.
Good continuation
1/27/2014 c14 floatsodelicately
Aw, baby Weasley :) another great chapter and I've read that Remus/Hermione story before but I can't remember the name, I'll pm you if I find it :)
1/26/2014 c14 Cat130
loving the story thank you
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