for The Morning After In the Mourning - 4a - Booth and the Zipper4/5/2013 c1 the dud pistachio
I was pretty excited when I saw this extension if chapter four! It was equal parts sexy and sweet. I found the part in which they exchanged "first time you wanted to's" with one another particularly hot! And Booth's regrets of not telling her he loved her that night of the Hoover is something I've always questioned as well so it's nice to see it brought up here at this particular moment. Thank you for the fantastic read :)
I was pretty excited when I saw this extension if chapter four! It was equal parts sexy and sweet. I found the part in which they exchanged "first time you wanted to's" with one another particularly hot! And Booth's regrets of not telling her he loved her that night of the Hoover is something I've always questioned as well so it's nice to see it brought up here at this particular moment. Thank you for the fantastic read :)
3/28/2013 c1 Jenny1701
I'm sooo glad you wrote chapter 4a - it was perfect and some of that they discussed goes a long way to explaining why I felt they had such an exceptional connection in chapters 4/5. Great descriptive writing I could metaphorically "feel" what they did as I read. I also have to wonder about the two pages from her book mentioned in chapter 5? loved this addition to the story. Eagerly awaiting the next update. Have a great Easter.
Jenny
I'm sooo glad you wrote chapter 4a - it was perfect and some of that they discussed goes a long way to explaining why I felt they had such an exceptional connection in chapters 4/5. Great descriptive writing I could metaphorically "feel" what they did as I read. I also have to wonder about the two pages from her book mentioned in chapter 5? loved this addition to the story. Eagerly awaiting the next update. Have a great Easter.
Jenny
3/25/2013 c1 
2OBXMegs
LOVED THIS! Great job!
I'm loving the full fic. too! Can't wait for more!
I'vegotGLEEinmyBONES
2OBXMegsLOVED THIS! Great job!
I'm loving the full fic. too! Can't wait for more!
I'vegotGLEEinmyBONES
3/24/2013 c1 harper83
So glad you expanded on that chapter! Great job! Can't wait for chapter 5.
Oh and not that it really matters at all...but Booth and Brennan met when she was teaching at American. Northwestern is where I think she was supposed to have gone. Either way it's outside Chicago not in D.C.
So glad you expanded on that chapter! Great job! Can't wait for chapter 5.
Oh and not that it really matters at all...but Booth and Brennan met when she was teaching at American. Northwestern is where I think she was supposed to have gone. Either way it's outside Chicago not in D.C.
3/24/2013 c1 10delia84
Let me just say ... they WOULD both have lists. I love how Brennan is the first to insist that they not get two of her fantasies mixed up that night ... haha. And the way hers is organized — am I surprised in the least? Nope.
I like that they both keep up their talking about the lists for a while. Impressive ... but hey, they're both competitive and not going to back down from talking about things. And Brennan's explanation of how she found out about the mile high club is hilarious. (And props to sweet Angela for helping Brennan not be so clueless.)
I also kind of like that you've got them talking throughout the whole rendezvous. I feel like that's pretty accurate — either they'd both be talking 90 miles an hour or both be completely ... well, not quiet, but you know what I mean.
Nicely done! Excited for chapter 5 of the Roxie/Tony stories.
10delia84Let me just say ... they WOULD both have lists. I love how Brennan is the first to insist that they not get two of her fantasies mixed up that night ... haha. And the way hers is organized — am I surprised in the least? Nope.
I like that they both keep up their talking about the lists for a while. Impressive ... but hey, they're both competitive and not going to back down from talking about things. And Brennan's explanation of how she found out about the mile high club is hilarious. (And props to sweet Angela for helping Brennan not be so clueless.)
I also kind of like that you've got them talking throughout the whole rendezvous. I feel like that's pretty accurate — either they'd both be talking 90 miles an hour or both be completely ... well, not quiet, but you know what I mean.
Nicely done! Excited for chapter 5 of the Roxie/Tony stories.
3/24/2013 c1 jsboneslover
I started reading without reading your note at the top, but after a couple of paragraphs I went back and then really got into it! What a great retelling of the B&B history...naked, in bed, hoping for a better outcome for many situations that drove us wild! Well done. Lots to explore after this, I think.
I started reading without reading your note at the top, but after a couple of paragraphs I went back and then really got into it! What a great retelling of the B&B history...naked, in bed, hoping for a better outcome for many situations that drove us wild! Well done. Lots to explore after this, I think.