
11/11/2013 c1 cool
love it
keep up the great work
love it
keep up the great work
3/28/2013 c1
3rowen raven
This is interesting, very very much so. I look forward to read how Kili will harden his heart to spare Fili the pain of loosing him, how he will misinterpretate this brother's advences and of couser how willFili fight against Kili's ingraned behaviour and self worthlessness and against Thorin's pride.

This is interesting, very very much so. I look forward to read how Kili will harden his heart to spare Fili the pain of loosing him, how he will misinterpretate this brother's advences and of couser how willFili fight against Kili's ingraned behaviour and self worthlessness and against Thorin's pride.
3/27/2013 c1 Guest
This is good
This is good
3/25/2013 c1
3Tara6
Very interesting, I'm intrigued. I love good whump-fics and Kili is usually the victim of some of the best ones. The idea of him being a 'spare' is one I've read before someone else who also used the prompt you added as inspiration, but you put a twist on it by having Kili plan out his brother death (and failing to go through with it). Can't wait to see where you'll take this fic next. Hope to see more soon!
Love Tara

Very interesting, I'm intrigued. I love good whump-fics and Kili is usually the victim of some of the best ones. The idea of him being a 'spare' is one I've read before someone else who also used the prompt you added as inspiration, but you put a twist on it by having Kili plan out his brother death (and failing to go through with it). Can't wait to see where you'll take this fic next. Hope to see more soon!
Love Tara
3/25/2013 c1 guest
keep wrighting! please i really like it!
keep wrighting! please i really like it!
3/25/2013 c1 Happy
Aww, sad! I hope Kili doesn't kill Fili! :(
Aww, sad! I hope Kili doesn't kill Fili! :(