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4/29/2016 c1 6fire90
Just...hot! hot! hot!
Good work :D
2/4/2014 c1 JosephineM
I so love this story! I just read it second time and love it as on first time. thank you
9/12/2013 c1 17Ladii Emelia
Wonderful fic. Loved your idea.
8/11/2013 c1 81Ryunn Kazan
Won't they ever get some alone time *-_-
Loved it to the final punctuation mark!
4/24/2013 c1 55The Animanga Girl
Poor Ruby! This is the second fic I read that she finds them infraganti XD
4/17/2013 c1 143Usio-Amamiya
very hooooooot
3/27/2013 c1 32lily moonlight
Hi, how are you? It was nice to see two updates from you :) Just a quick mention, there might have been a bit of a glitch with the formatting as half was in italics, which I don't think you'll have meant.
But on to the story! I like the idea of selling kisses to raise money for a library :D The characters who are waiting in line for kisses are really well written, I liked them. I did feel sorry for Belle with Gold's behaviour; why did he not see her for 8 days? I'm curious about that. I really sympathised when she tried to convince herself that she was fine, that she had friends and a new dress.
When they make love was romantic and fun as well as with a sense of urgency, although to be walked in on is pretty embarrassing - poor things! The ending was so sweet, too :)
3/26/2013 c1 Anne andrews
This was awesome jealousy and sex! Alright!
3/26/2013 c1 39Mi-chan.HxS
Great job!
It's the third OUAT fic I read and the first M rated Rumbelle. Just perfect!
I want to read some more ;D
3/25/2013 c1 17juju0268
Awesome, I loved every word!
3/25/2013 c1 anon
funny!

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