for Paris In June5/2/2013 c1 
16HeartOfParadise
You touched me in a sense that cannot be described. I really like the way you portrayed Enjolras and his family/family relations. And Grantaire, you made me love Grantaire, from the way he looked at Enjolras, the banter he had with Eponine to the way he took Gavroche from the fallen barricade. Your writing sounds so natural, it's lovely :)
16HeartOfParadiseYou touched me in a sense that cannot be described. I really like the way you portrayed Enjolras and his family/family relations. And Grantaire, you made me love Grantaire, from the way he looked at Enjolras, the banter he had with Eponine to the way he took Gavroche from the fallen barricade. Your writing sounds so natural, it's lovely :)