7/8/2013 c1 117team effort
Oh, you had me at the line about skin cancer. XD
This is lovely, and I look forward to reading more. :)
Oh, you had me at the line about skin cancer. XD
This is lovely, and I look forward to reading more. :)
3/26/2013 c1 32Lax4U
I love this it made me laugh numerous times and alex seems like my kind of person, this is great keep on writing this!
I love this it made me laugh numerous times and alex seems like my kind of person, this is great keep on writing this!
3/25/2013 c1 54Tailsdoll123
That...was...AWESOME! Loved it and thanks! I feel so sorry for Claire, what my character does to her -shakes head.-
My chapters have been short haven't they? I will try and make them longer!
That...was...AWESOME! Loved it and thanks! I feel so sorry for Claire, what my character does to her -shakes head.-
My chapters have been short haven't they? I will try and make them longer!
3/25/2013 c1 6GioRocket
I enjoyed the first chapter, Alex is an interesting one...she seems exactly the kind of person I would hate in real life, and I an imagine her attitude becoming tiresome as the story progresses but as for right now, I would say her personality is much better than just a generic boring starting trainer
It was well written and I'll probably read the rest :)
I enjoyed the first chapter, Alex is an interesting one...she seems exactly the kind of person I would hate in real life, and I an imagine her attitude becoming tiresome as the story progresses but as for right now, I would say her personality is much better than just a generic boring starting trainer
It was well written and I'll probably read the rest :)